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Pants on Fire(whiskey) | NC-17 | Part 2 of 2

Apr 29, 2007 18:45

Title: Pants on Fire(whiskey)
Author: goneoffthelump
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: Post-War 13: Hermione walks in on them by mistake - and approves. Possibly even saw it coming. Harry’s POV.
Summary: Once again, something Harry can’t remember has changed everything.
Notes: First half is here.

( Pants on Fire(whiskey), contd. )

2007, nc-17, goneoffthelump

Comments 64

allifer April 30 2007, 00:51:52 UTC

OOOH! This Ron is just SO DAMN ADORBALE!!!

shes_gone April 30 2007, 11:57:57 UTC

Harry thinks so!

fitzette April 30 2007, 00:51:53 UTC

oh, now this was just lovely. Something about it just tugged at my heart. The writing was beautiful and the lovin' was hot and really, the whole thing was brilliant.

Have you got other goodies?

shes_gone April 30 2007, 11:58:21 UTC

Thank you! I’m so pleased. No other goodies yet - I was deprived of the glory that is Harry/Ron until only very recently and this is my first one. But I’m going to try to make up for lost time!

Also, I can’t even handle how much I love your icon.

fitzette April 30 2007, 13:10:32 UTC

thanks! It was drawn by the lovely yaaronet and iconed by the amazing jocap. They are the dynamic duo of being awesome.

Is this your first fanfic or your first Harry/Ron? Cause I gotta say, you're one hell of a writer.

shes_gone April 30 2007, 16:16:07 UTC

Haha, obviously they are!

And I’m blushing like a Weasley. Haha, I think this qualifies as my second fanfic. I wrote a little something in another fandom for a friend of mine - I’m very late to this party I’m afraid. Thanks for the comments!

whatitistoburn1 April 30 2007, 01:30:33 UTC

This was absolutely perfect. I loved it and if I started, I could quote so many wonderful lines but this one made me laugh outloud:

He blushed so intensely that I wondered if he didn’t think he’d just been caught trying to put his cock in my arse atop the high table during the start of term feast.

I'm still giggling, actually.

Everything about this was wonderful from the awkwardness and your Hermione! and the way their thoughts echoed each other and the wonderful way it ended. Just lovely, I ADORED it.

shes_gone April 30 2007, 11:58:49 UTC

Thank you! Haha, that is one of my favourites, too. Can’t you just see it?!

esporamor April 30 2007, 01:39:13 UTC

The first part, Ron could not get more adorable by his reaction at the Cannon's winning!!

Then... I think my brain just exploded, so of course just for the purpose to understand the plot, I had to read it again. Ron was so caring and so worried about hurting Harry, could Ron get more perfect?

And there's never enough of Jealous!Harry, even if it lasted just a couple of lines.

This is a wonderful awesome fic, really really great.
Really.

shes_gone April 30 2007, 11:59:13 UTC

Double comment, wow! Thank you! Yes, there is much complicated plot here, very important that you understand all the nuances. ;)

serena979 April 30 2007, 02:07:13 UTC

OH YEAH!

The plot was great, but the sex was even greater! Whew! I need a moment to process that story, so I think I'll read it again!

Notice all the exclaimation marks?!

shes_gone April 30 2007, 11:59:25 UTC

Yay! So glad you liked it. :)