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Fic: "Exposition" by delicfcd

Jun 04, 2005 00:02

Author: Delicfcd
Title: Exposition
Challenge: Verse: Iron & Wine, Naked As We Came. ‘she says "wake up, it's no use pretending"/ i'll keep stealing, breathing her’
Rating: PG
Summary: Harry can’t explain how he feels, or why he’s stealing chances to be around Ginny. Luckily, Ginny just wants him to explain why he’s an idiot.
Genre: Flangst. ( Read more... )

author:delicfcd, 3rd wave, 3rd wave:fic

Comments 68

ladyg_funk June 3 2005, 17:59:30 UTC

That was a very enjoyable read. I love the witty narration and Ginny's thoughts, and especially the dialogue. Excellent tone and pacing and lovely plot. Great job and a brilliant addition to the ficafest!

delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:13:33 UTC

Thank you!

tunxeh June 3 2005, 18:30:03 UTC

I enjoyed this a lot. How like Harry to go stubborn and withdrawn instead of trying to repair his misunderstanding. The way she goes after him anyway is part of what makes Ginny the one for him.

delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:13:58 UTC

Thanks! :)

eimajunknown June 3 2005, 18:50:38 UTC

At first she’d been inclined to give him the benefit of the doubt and assume there was in fact a pressing case of ‘uhh…’ that required his attention.

He wore pyjamas rather than just his boxers, the inconsiderate git.

*giggling*

and the innuendo at the end? :D

very funny story :)

delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:14:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. :)

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delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:17:34 UTC

Thank you!

Only one, and it's *whispers* H/L rather than H/G. Over at Astronomy Tower.

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delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:32:12 UTC

Ooh, where? I mean, uhh, you horrible wrong person you. ;)

I still like That Other Ship Which I Won't Talk About Here, but my OTP is H/G all the way.

They are, aren't they?

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poseida9 June 3 2005, 22:44:43 UTC

Oh my god, the last two lines are the best innuendo I hae EVER read. No, really. I am not even kidding. PURE brilliance.

I really like this fic. I am such a fan of Harry being silly and dumb. And you did a really amazing job of writing the kiss etc. (ahem, ET CETERA) without making it cliched and ridiculous. I love Harry being suave at the end, too. :)

delicfcd June 6 2005, 01:21:17 UTC

Suave Harry is fun, but he really only works in small doses. I'm glad you liked it. (I swear, that kiss was the hardest part of the whole thing, it almost killed me, so yay! It worked!)

Thank you!