Art: voices to voices,lip to lip...

[reallycorking]

Artist: reallycorking
Challenge: Poem - e.e. cummings: voices to voices,lip to lip/i swear(to noone everyone)constitutes/undying
Media: pencil and photoshop
Rating: PG (?)
Warnings: almost-kissing. about 200KB

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Comments

[ladyg_funk]

Oh, that's hot. I love the focus on their lips and his fingers. If you do have a link to the original whole image, I'd love to see that too, just out of curiousity. I love the pencil work. Thanks! :) Great addition to the ficafest.

[reallycorking]

Thanks! :D I'm glad you like. I thought the focus on their lips and fingers was much more pronounced when I cropped it a bit.

Buuuut, I've got the original one here, if you'd still like to look. Looking at it now makes me kind of grumpy though, since I'm very not pleased with it. But enjoy! :)

[ladyg_funk]

The original is nice, but I'm glad you cropped it because their face, especially their eyes and cheeks, take away from the focus of their lips. On the other hand, I really like the shadowing of the cheeks and their hair. :) Thanks again for your entry! Feel free to claim another one if you so feel challenged. ;P

[reallycorking]

Yeah, that's exactly my feeling. There's of things that I like about the original, but the eyes etc. kept distracting from the focus of the picture.

haha, I'll see if some more inspiration comes for another piece (don't tempt me). :)

[ladyg_funk]

I agree it's beutimus