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Love Takes Time, Part I

Feb 12, 2005 14:23

Author:OHGinnyfan
Title: Love Takes Time
Challenge: #3 Post Hogwarts: Ginny is alone at the Burrow, planning on having a quiet night. Harry turns up and they finally confess how they feel.
Rating: R - for the sexy ending; This part is PG-13 though -- had to do this in 2 parts, thanks to LJ's length restrictions.
Word Count: around 4,700 total
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author:ohginnyfan, 2nd wave:fic, 2nd wave

Comments 5

mary_v February 12 2005, 23:28:08 UTC

*grin* I was so engrossed in reading this, I forgot you said there was going to be a part 2, so when I got to the end, I was thinking of adding "write more to this" in the review- seems there's no need!! lol- Well, that pointless bit of information was just a more original way to say that I absolutely LOVED this, and that I can;t wait for you to update!
~Maria~

arlenerios February 13 2005, 05:42:09 UTC

Wow, this could go as a one shot! Off to the second part!

lor_z February 13 2005, 07:55:09 UTC

"“Less thinking, more kissing,” Harry mumbled against her lips." *Sigh* I love your Harry. But I SUPPOSE I'll have to let Ginny have him, lol. Loved Part II as well. Awesome job.

pixiellie February 13 2005, 22:48:29 UTC

I really enjoyed this. You did a wonderful job. *grin* Fluff was just what I needed. Nice way to set the scene of Ginny and Molly having discussions about her career. This sort of small detail adds layers to a story that I appreciate. It makes the whole feel more realistic to me. Plus, Molly would want her only girl to be a more traditional witch. :)

Love the shower scene- there is a special kind of pleasure from a long hot shower when you're cold and dirty. You feel so mellow. Perfect time for the man of your dreams to show up. :)

My favorite line? "He paused for a moment, then stood up quickly, taking large strides to meet her at the stairs. He offered her his hand and helped her down the last stairs. “Gin,” he said, “you look beautiful." That he moves towards her, even with them dancing around their feelings for each other. Just got to me for some reason. A sincere compliment is worth it's weight ( ... )

lissa_maylee February 14 2005, 07:37:37 UTC

Mmmm...yummy.

I loved this whole package; the setup, the strange complimentary behaviour from Harry, the kissing.

*off to read Part 2*