Intermezzo, Part 2/5
Author: irislock
Title: Intermezzo
Challenge: #16. She dived under the table to retrieve the bowl and emerged with her face glowing like the setting sun. (Chamber of Secrets, UK adult cover page 51)
Rating: Hard R
Summary: Love was the easy part.
Word count: 3,656
Warnings: Harry/OFC, Ginny/OMC, implied Ginny/Luna, explicit sexual ( Read more... )
Title: Intermezzo
Challenge: #16. She dived under the table to retrieve the bowl and emerged with her face glowing like the setting sun. (Chamber of Secrets, UK adult cover page 51)
Rating: Hard R
Summary: Love was the easy part.
Word count: 3,656
Warnings: Harry/OFC, Ginny/OMC, implied Ginny/Luna, explicit sexual ( Read more... )
About the Weasleys: Although it's clear that Harry and Ginny aren't together, and the Weasleys probably suspect that it's because of Harry, I'm not sure Ginny has told anyone in her family the particulars of the break-up. She has a job and doesn't live at home and so presumably doesn't see her family every day. Harry was in France for a bit, and Ginny was getting ready for Quidditch trials, so it wasn't that difficult for them to miss each other at the Burrow. When they are there at the same time, they at least are civil to each other. In any event, the Weasleys love Harry independently of his relationship with Ginny and would probably invite him over anyway unless she specifically asked them not to.
About Ron: Well, in my head, Ron left the pub before Harry and Daphne hooked up. He only found out about it the next day when he and Hermione spent the day with Daphne and her cousin (who is on the team.) Ron may be upset on Ginny's behalf, but remember that Ginny is already dating someone else at this point. I think that Ron (and Hermione, whom I suspect is coaching Ron behind the scenes) is trying not to interfere too much, and he doesn't have the heart to take the mickey out of Harry when he is feeling so miserable.
That is probably more explanation than you wanted right now. They are very valid points, though, that are not addressed directly in the upcoming parts.
In any case, thanks so much for the feedback.
The build up of angst is making me excited for the next chapters :-)
This makes me outrageously happy!
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