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Revelations (Fic, H/D, PG)

Aug 10, 2008 16:40

Title: Revelations
Author: ayane_tsurugi
Type: Fiction
Length: ~3,100 words.
Main character or Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG
Canon compliancy: Canon through the end of OotP.
Disclaimer: Believe it or not, I am not nor have I ever been J.K. Rowling, and therefore hold no legal claim to Harry Potter or anything in his canonical universe. Those belong to J.K. ( Read more... )

by: ayane_tsurugi, pg, round 3, fic, h/d

Comments 14

jade_chan August 10 2008, 20:54:32 UTC

I don't know why, but I really love that last line. :3 It's just amazing. I am truly not a fan of the pairing, but you made me squiggle anyway. *shakes fist at you!*

And... and... it's all my fault if I missed any typos or failed as a beta~! *takes responsibility!*

ayane_tsurugi August 24 2008, 14:10:41 UTC

*adores you*

Beware, though. The longer you hang out with me, the greater the chance I will convert you. You will love H/D! *weird hypnotizing finger motions*

<3

'm using a random RP journal on you~! sevensecondtour August 24 2008, 16:44:04 UTC

*adores back!*

Oh gosh. XD; I'm scared, 'cause I bet with the way you write, you might eventually convert me. And then I'll dig out my old Draco account and go looking for a game to put him in. It would be a CHAIN REACTION OF DOOM!

♥

burningasphodel August 11 2008, 02:16:59 UTC

"...he swept out of the room with all the grace of a very large three-legged hippogriff." What a great line.

Your interpretation of the cards was very interesting. It's so like Draco to have the last word--even in fanfiction! I liked this.

Good work!

ayane_tsurugi August 24 2008, 14:13:28 UTC

The interpretation part of it was what bothered me about stopping it short like this. Like I said, it was meant to be a lot longer and a whole lot more plotty. But I finally managed to convince myself that it still worked after a lot of internal debate.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ravenna_c_tan August 11 2008, 07:41:54 UTC

Hee! I want to quote the hippogriff line too! Lovely story!

ayane_tsurugi August 24 2008, 14:14:55 UTC

Thanks, Ravenna. <3

I'm just glad I didn't disappoint.

raspberry_rave August 13 2008, 19:55:42 UTC

I had a revelation. Lol. How VERY Malfoy. :)

ayane_tsurugi August 24 2008, 14:21:46 UTC

Hee, I tried really hard to make Draco actually be Draco. I hate it when he's blatantly OOC.

I'm glad you liked it! =]

lotrwariorgodss August 15 2008, 17:34:43 UTC

Tell us how you really feel, won't you, Harry? =)
I feel like if Harry were ever to tell someone like Draco about himself, this is exactly how it would happen, in runaway-train fashion; poor thing's got so much bottled up it's bound to spill out sometime. Love Draco pushing all his buttons in the beginning too, lol. Nice entry!

ayane_tsurugi August 24 2008, 15:26:31 UTC

I know, poor Harry. He's just a big ticking time bomb by the time his sixth year rolls around. *pets him*

Glad you enjoyed it!