snitchnip_chill & florahart

[melpemone]

Author: Chillie (snitchnip_chill)
Title: Maybe At The Time It Felt Like
Pairing: Fred/George
Challenge: It makes me angry, ashamed, but really alive - Manic Street Preachers, No Surface All Feeling

Comments

[herlifeisbroken]

Wow. Fantastic, disturbing, amazing.

wow. This line: Now, I want freckles and pale moon-blue skin on shuttered eyes, silent in the dark, unknown and unspoken and never, ever returned. really did me in.

Loved it, Flora.

[florahart]

:D Thanks.

[icarusinwax]

oh my! This was disturbing and completely smutty at the same time. I adore his inner turmoil and him being asked if he has the same dreams. *dead* I'm not usually fond of the twins but these two pieces have blown me away.

[florahart]

:D Thanks.

[florahart]

:D Yeah, it does, doesn't it? Wow. Course, this is likely just because I remixed by expansion rather than by extension (which never occurred to me as an approach). Heh.

[gmth]

Oh, lovely. I'm so glad you didn't give the POV twin a name, because I love the idea that it can be either one of them, or even both of them doing it to each other and neither one acknowledging it, or even knowing that the other is doing it. Great job, Flora! Great job, Chillie! :-)

[florahart]

She didn't, so I didn't. The further into it I got, the less I felt able to assign the roles, you know? :D Thanks.

[florahart]

Hee! Yay! *soaks feet in puddle, which is just as good as a kiss, or better maybe...*