To Be A Captive - A gift for dexstarr!

[scarletladyy]

Title: To Be A Captive
Author: gamma_x_orionis
Recipient: dexstarr
Pairing(s): Bellatrix and Narcissa/Cho
Word Count: 2 800
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of sex slavery. Incestuous undertones if you squint very hard.
Summary: Bellatrix was the one who took prisoners, not Narcissa.
Author's Notes: dexstarr, I really hope you like this. The focus ended up being more on the

Comments

[shameful_desire]

I would love to read more of this. The dynamic between Narcissa and Bellatrix is intriguing. I felt for Narcissa, that last line was perfect.

[janejenajeny]

Ooh, very nice job. Loved how you characterized Narcissa! :D

[snegurochka_lee]

This is really fascinating! I love the dynamic between the sisters.

[sassy_cat]

Bellatrix has a great voice here. "Now see here, Cissy." Bellatrix's voice suddenly went very sharp and firm. "I shall not have you arguing about this. She's very frightening but doesn't come off as mad, which I like a lot. There's an interesting power dynamic between the sisters, and one has to wonder what Bellatrix was subjected to as a child as well.
I love that this is as much about Narcissa's forced captivity as Cho's detainment. Really well done.

[dexstarr]

I apologize for not replying before - I did a comment on my phone but it must not have gone through and I just realized it didn't.

I do like how Cho is more of a minor character, and you focus on the relationship between Bellatrix and Narcissa. I never thought of this angle, as Narcissa as a prisoner in her home during DH. I always imagined she wouldn't like it, but I like how you've given me another view of it. The last line is quite striking, and I like the interactions between the sisters. Well done. Thank you, Mystery Author.