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He Falls, Like a White Bird Through the Sky for rynstar15

Sep 08, 2010 09:44

Title: He Falls, Like a White Bird Through the Sky
Author: lonefranc
Recipient: rynstar15
Pairing(s): Draco/Hermione
Word Count: 8,806
Rating: R
Warnings: Non con, poison testing
Summary: He is her warden, she his captive.
Author's Notes: For RynStar15 (hope that counted as DP), with thanks to my dear beta.

( He Falls, Like a White Bird Through the Sky )

character: hermione, !fic, pairing: draco/hermione, type: het, exchange: 2010, character: draco

Comments 4

scarletladyy September 8 2010, 13:48:50 UTC

I'm in love with this fic. I particularly like how both Draco and Astoria don't seem to get on with Lance, and also how Draco took Astoria's shifts. Great, great work :)

rynstar15 September 8 2010, 20:15:09 UTC

Wonderfully written :) I love how you shaped it so that they were both improsoned in a way: she by her mind and body and he by his feelings for her. The end just leaves me aching for a future happiness. I like the tie in with Astoria and I LOVE the whole Vincent Crabbe thing. I have never thought about that, completely ingenious. Thank you for keeping our characters canon and for giving our bookworm something to read. Thank you for my story!! :D

incandescent September 10 2010, 12:17:29 UTC

This is absolutely beautiful. It is delicate and surreal. I think that you conveyed the tone of Hermione's capture and her mental state perfectly. And Draco's emotions were gorgeous as well, so conflicted and strong. I really, really love this. I think that it's the best story in the entire fest so far. It's amazing. Thank you for writing this. ♥

mistress_cinder August 16 2015, 14:24:04 UTC

I love this story! What happens next is anyone's guess. You captured the fringe hate group thing perfectly. The defeated may go underground but their hatred and anger does not just go away. Draco was already so over his father's politics when this happened. He just needed to let go of the last vestiges of his prejudices. His horror over her treatment pushes him over the edge. His betrothal and subsequent marriage seems contrived to represent the status quo. It kind of seemed to come out of nowhere since his father is dead and he would have been the head of the family. Hermione is never one to hold a grudge and is willing to see the best in others. She sees that Draco is there to help and there is an attraction there. Do they eventually follow it?!?