FIC: Right Here (James Sirius/Victoire, NC-17)

[nextgen_mod]

Title: Right Here
Author: gracerene
Prompt: #M4 by gracerene
Pairing: James/Victoire, past Teddy/Victoire, implications of James/Teddy
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3,800
Content/Warnings: comfort sex, pining, cousincest, break-ups
Summary: If James couldn't be with Teddy, then maybe he could be him, just for a while.
Author's Note: Many thanks to my betas for helping

Comments

[secretlypadfoot]

Ah.  I want to know how it turns out.  So much emotion in a small amount of words and I want more. 

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! I'm glad this hooked you in! :D

[snegurochka_lee]

I really liked this! James's thoughts about Teddy and what he might like in bed, while he's having sex with Victoire, were so perfect. And I admit I thought it would go in another direction when she told him Teddy was in love with him! Like it would end there, with her getting her revenge against both of them through sex. But I'm glad she turned out to be nicer than that. :) And the ending has great promise for the new couple!

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! I'd considered going the darker route with Victoire, but I decided that she wouldn't do something so mean, no matter how sad she was. Thanks again for reading! :)

[capitu]

I really loved this. I mean, it's very messed up if you think about it, which is one of the many things I loved. The idea of James thinking about Teddy while he's with Victoire is just wrong so good and hot.

I love that he was trying to offer her comfort, but somewhere along the way it went out of hand and with her confession, it just makes me wonder, is she going to keep her word and keep it a secret? Will James? :D I LOVE the ending.

Excellent work, mystery author! <333

[gracerene]

Thanks again, darling! One of the more obscure things I've written, I think, but I'm glad you enjoyed. :D

[my_thestral]

Aw, this one is bitter-sweet, isn't it? Victoire definitely seems to have a rather unique way of handling heartbreak and though unorthodox, her curiosity feels somewhat understandable. It's quite gracious of her not to stand in the way of their happiness, which makes me feel that perhaps she knew all along that what she had with Teddy, wasn't quite right.
You kind of feel sorry about the poor thing, looking for the answers in all the wrong places - I'm guessing that seducing James didn't exactly bring upon a revelation of why Teddy fell for him, rather than an utterly gorgeous her. They go such a long way back, I don't think this can be explained by sex (only).
Damn, I love those complex stories that make me think, good job there! :D

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and that it made you really think about Victoire and her relationship with Teddy. I definitely wanted to write something a bit more complex and complicated. :D

[gryffindorj]

Early in the fic when Victoire said "Salazar" I immediately thought oh she's a Slytherin. Then I thought she was totally going to fuck him by fucking him. Meaning ruin the whole potential with Teddy by having him first. SO GLAD YOU DIDN'T DO THAT! I mean I guess it could happen but as T/J is my next gen OTP I choose to think no. I love that it was his desire for Teddy egging James on and not just any warm hole will do. Also Victoire wanting to know. I enjoyed this very much. Well done!

[gracerene]

Oo, I'm so happy you picked up on that little Salazar hint! I do love the idea of a Slytherin Victoire, and I briefly considered going the darker route with this one, but I just couldn't do that to James and Teddy! I need them to get their happy ending! Thanks for reading this one, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)