Burn Again Tomorrow (Ron/Scorpius, NC-17)

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Author: entrenous88
Title: Burn Again Tomorrow
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,271 words
Pairing(s): Ron/Scorpius
Warnings: Infidelity (background Ron/Hermione)
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: "No one has to know." Scorpius's eyes were

Comments

[hpfangirl71]

Oh I loved this... Ron trying so hard to deny his feelings, to be a good husband and Scorpius so determined to have what he's always wanted and his innocence is so precious... I love how tender Ron is with him in the end after he finds out its his first time doing anything like that!! This was my first time reading this pair but I really got into it and might have to try finding more to read. <3

[entrenous88]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so pleased you felt Ron's struggle here, and sensed his tenderness with Scorpio as they continue. I'm so happy to know you enjoyed this. :)

[ura_hd]

You wrote Ron really well. He reads indeed like Ron. Scorpius is one persistent man. The dynamics between the two is very interesting. I feel bad about Hermione... Cools story!

[entrenous88]

Thank you very much! It's wonderful to hear you felt Ron sounded in character. I really appreciate your kind and detailed feedback -- thanks again!

[stuckinsea]

Excellent job, Ron was perfect and love seeing such an innocent Scorpius. Hopefully you'll write a sequel and we can read about their first time. Thanks for sharing.

[entrenous88]

Thank you very much! I liked the idea of playing with Scorpius seeming so persistent and worldly but in truth having little experience with either the physical or emotional components of such relationships. Ah, I'd love to write more of these two together; I'm not certain if it would be a true sequel to this, but I imagine I'll try my hand with the pairing again. Thanks again!

[enchantedteapot]

*le gasp* I've never given much thought to the ins and outs of a ron/scor relationship but you've painted a wonderful set of dynamics here. I adore how you didn't just write off Hermione/Ron as a horrible, dissapointing marriage - the fact that Ron obviously still has a lot of love for her and his family life adds a really interesting layer and makes this blossoming thing with Scorpius so much more complex and intriguing. Super job mystery author!

[entrenous88]

:DDDDD Glad I made you gasp, and so glad you found the dynamics between the two of them compelling in this fic! I really do think Ron would still feel loyalty and love for Hermione, but of course he's flawed and the idea of someone who wants him so badly has a huge appeal.

Thank you very much indeed!

[wonderluck]

Yay! This was wonderful. I hadn't considered Ron/Scorpius previously, but I highly approve!

[entrenous88]

Thank you so much! It's wonderful to hear you liked the pairing here even if you'd never thought of these two characters together before. :D