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A Little Advice (Scorpius/Dominique, PG)

Mar 15, 2012 19:54

Author: briony_tallis
Title: A Little Advice
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2218
Pairing(s): Scorpius/Dominique
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy thinks Dominique Weasley is perfect. He just doesn't know how to tell ( Read more... )

type: het, character: scorpius malfoy, rating: pg, pairing: dominique/scorpius, character: dominique weasley, *fest: 2012, media: fic

Comments 7

lady_blue_peach March 17 2012, 06:09:39 UTC

Great fic, cute and to the point... I like it!!

sisi_rambles March 17 2012, 19:38:50 UTC

Bumbling!Scorpius was delightful. All the "help" from the family was so hilarious! I love how Scorpius still wonders whether he should get their help at the end.

katmarajade March 18 2012, 16:15:21 UTC

Awww, adorable. I love a flustered, smitten Malfoy and his crush on Dominique was darling. I also loved all the advice from the Weasley clan and how dismissive he was of it-- even the good stuff! Oh, to be young and stupid and in love. :) Such a sweet fic and I loved the ending, how Dominique slapped him and then had him ask her out. Again with the awwww! I loved it.

jargonelle March 18 2012, 17:15:26 UTC

This was very cute. The conversation between Lily and Rose was great, as was the final one between Scorpius and Dominique. :)

icicle33 March 21 2012, 04:11:13 UTC

This was really funny and charming. I adored how thick and lovesick poor Scorpius was. I think these were my favorite lines though. Your Rose was brilliant. Always the voice of reason.

"A surprise kiss," Lily said, sighing dreamily. "You just march right up to her and snog her senseless. All girls love that, it's so romantic."

"It most certainly is not," Rose said loudly. "That's sexual harassment, that is. Girls do not like being waylaid by violent kisses from someone they hardly know. Do not follow that advice, Scorpius, promise me."