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Fic: Cousins (Scorpius/Lily; Scorpius/Rose), NC-17

Feb 17, 2010 09:49

Recipient: feigned_living
Title: Cousins
Pairing(s): Scorpius/Lily; Scorpius/Rose
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Scorpius thought he would never have a chance with Lily. But all he needed was a little patience.
Word Count: 5,098
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is ( Read more... )

*fest: 2010, type: het, character: lily luna potter, pairing: rose/scorpius, pairing: lily/scorpius, rating: nc-17, character: scorpius malfoy, character: rose weasley, media: fic

Comments 26

luvscharlie February 17 2010, 15:04:26 UTC

I absolutely loved this. I think the scene in the pub is my very favourite and the characters you've portrayed here are done so well.

Brilliant!

lunalovepotter March 25 2010, 23:30:37 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! ♥ I think the pub scene is my favorite, too...

sevillagranada February 17 2010, 16:18:17 UTC

What a fun story! I actually really enjoyed the part with Rose, I thought her characterization was just right. I was glad that she and Lily were such close friends that they could talk about the Scorpius issue. Hugecock!Scorpius is brilliant, and I liked the little hints at his home life.

lunalovepotter March 25 2010, 23:31:58 UTC

Thanks very much! I am always happy to hear that my characterizations ring true. :)

cyyt February 17 2010, 17:22:09 UTC

Poor Rose though!

Lily's quite the perceptive girl, isn't she?(:

lunalovepotter March 25 2010, 23:36:12 UTC

Yes, poor Rose got the short end of things, LoL. Thanks for reading!

pretty_panther February 17 2010, 17:27:20 UTC

I love the language used and the characterisation. It all fits together to create a wonderful piece.

Brilliant work:)

lunalovepotter March 25 2010, 23:37:23 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

brighty18 February 17 2010, 20:50:02 UTC

Oh! that was just hot and delicious! What a perfect, sexy counterpart to the sweet, G-rated previous post.

Of course, Rose would tell Lily! How could she not!

Your characters felt very real and very adult (and not just the XXX sort of "adult") and were a joy to read. I loved Rose's spark and Hermione-like realism as well as Lily's crazy beauty. But it was your Scorpius who really shown. Damn, but I could love this version of him.

Well done!

lunalovepotter March 25 2010, 23:39:06 UTC

Thank you very much for such a nice comment. The most important thing to me is that my characterizations ring true. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)