FIC: Black Skirt Down (Albus Severus/Scorpius, NC-17)

Nov 14, 2016 11:00

Title: Black Skirt Down
Author: candamira
Prompt: #S70 by shiftylinguini
Pairing(s): Albus Severus Potter/Scorpius Malfoy
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~7,100
Content/Warnings: [Spoiler (click to open)]Harry Potter Next Generation, Cross Dressing, Banter, Misunderstandings, Getting Together, Boys Kissing, First Time, Explicit Sexual Content, Wall Sex, Anal Sex, Rimming, Partially Clothed Sex, Read more... )

character: albus severus potter, rating: nc-17, pairing: albus/scorpius, character: scorpius malfoy, *fest: 2016, type: slash, media: fic

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gracerene November 14 2016, 19:44:46 UTC
This was really wonderful! I loved your writing and the imagery throughout--it was all so vivid! Scorpius's pining was fantastic, and I liked that he was the stylish one of the three friends and the one that could help them out with their unfortunate makeup experiences. Though, of course, the sensual process leading to such a desirous outcome for Albus and Scorpius was my favorite. Great work!

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candamira November 29 2016, 14:36:35 UTC
Thank you so much, Grace! Your comment - especially the praise on my writing and the imagery - made me incredibly happy. :-)

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sabethea November 14 2016, 20:39:39 UTC
I love the one who doesn't want to wear make up being the one who can put it on :) And Scorpius pining. And Al in a skirt. Mmm, Al in a skirt. *sighs almost as dreamily as Scorpius*

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candamira November 29 2016, 14:25:05 UTC
Yeah... Al in a skirt. *sighs dreamily along with you* Like Scorpius, I couldn't resist. Thank you for the lovely comment!

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nia_kantorka November 14 2016, 22:24:45 UTC
I really loved your lively and charming Scorpius here, MA! Glad he got Al and his skirt in the end. Thank you very much for sharing!

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candamira November 29 2016, 14:22:25 UTC
Thank you, sweetheart. Somehow my nextgen!fics tend to get written from a Malfoynian-POV. ;-) You know that praise from you always makes me very happy. <3

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cap_bookworm November 15 2016, 01:41:27 UTC
Al in a skirt is to die for! Also I can just imagine how beautiful he must have looked with that amazing smokey eye. All of the little details in this are great. I love your descriptions of everything and I just love this fic! Wonderful job <3

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candamira November 29 2016, 14:12:35 UTC
Thank you, cap! Yes, Al in a short skirt is lethal. ;-) Further down someone also suspects me of wanting to kill them with the sexy picture of Al in his skirt... I always take great care of descriptions and enjoy creating a setting very much, so it's a special joy for me to read that you loved them. Thanks again! <3

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capitu November 15 2016, 12:02:11 UTC
That was utterly charming. I absolutely adored Scorpius's voice. He was just so the cutest being all moody and grumpy - excuse me, suppressing all those sighs. :D

I loved his reaction when he caught sight of Al.

So ... if it looked like a duck, swam like a duck, and quacked like a duck, then it most likely was a duck. Consequently, if someone had eyes like Al, an arse like Al, and dressed like Al - it had to be Al.
Arithmancy study group, my arse!

LOL! Poor Scorpius. I mean, yeah, poor Scorpius, deceived in such way! But I love his plan! A man with a purpose! I love how he went in and totally took charge of the happening.

I love him applying make up to Al, and just, yeah, his voice was perfect. Can't say enough how much I enjoyed it. :)

And Rose and her super power of ruining perfect moments.

Poor Rose. Not her fault that she had developed a rare talent for ruining special moments - she just hadn't learned to recognise them. Her mother was the bluntest witch Scorpius had ever met and Ron Weasley wasn't a shining example of ( ... )

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candamira November 29 2016, 14:07:49 UTC
Capitu! Thank you so much, lovely. For this gorgeous comment and the rec. A rec! For me! I couldn't believe my eyes. You know how to make a girl happy. ;-) Yes, all three here have their special super power - fashionista!Scorpius, ruining moments!Rose and looking sexy in a skirt! Al. How wonderful you loved their little make-up-adventure so much. <3

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