FIC: Give Me Envy, Give Me Malice, Give Me Your Attention (Albus Severus/Scorpius, NC-17)

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Title: Give Me Envy, Give Me Malice, Give Me Your Attention
Author: _melodic_
Prompt: #M5 by sabethea
Pairing(s): Scorpius/Albus Severus, Scorpius/Teddy, Scorpius/Louis, Scorpius/Charlie
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4,000
Content/Warnings: Hand Jobs, Blow Jobs, Frottage, Anal Sex, Angst, Jealousy, Pining, Nonlinear Timeline.
Summary: Scorpius finally steels the nerve

Comments

[sabethea]

Oh, this is so brilliant and MA, you have done wonders with the prompt. Thank You so much! I love all the detail, the different scenes interspersed with the flashbacks. Albus is an idiot and deserves what he gets, and I do hope Scorpius.got some pleasure out of it all, as well as with the final outcome.

Poor Scorpius, but he took a beautiful revenge. Also, I have never read Charlie/Scorpius before so that addition made me particularly thrilled. Thank you thank you thank you!

[_melodic_]

Eee, I'm so glad you liked this story! I wanted to try for some hurtful angst but lots of flashes of smut and I hope I was able to pull it off, haha. Albus did turn out to be a bit of a jerk and Scorpius wasn't at his finest either, but hey Scorpius got some hot sex and there was a happy ending, so... good for the boys? Hehe. Thanks for your lovely comment! <3

[my_thestral]

Awww, poor Scorp with his head in the clouds, opening his heart to Al, only to get rejected so painfully. Perhaps screwing the entire Weasley&co. line was not entirely the best way to go to mend his poor heart, but at least it had a beneficial impact on silly Al, who got a good lesson on what it meant "no strings attached". Maybe Scorpius sensed that Al wasn't entirely insensitive to his charms and perhaps just needed to experience how good they had it when they were still together. :)
It was a sexy, lovely story and I confess I was most pleasantly surprised by the happy end! (And as a big Hugo fan, I must say I was happy that he got away from being nothing but a trophy, he deserves better, LOL! :))

[_melodic_]

Hehe yes poor Scorpius although he does choose a somewhat cruel (if not sexually satisfying) way to get revenge on Al. Perhaps he did know somewhere that Al had more feelings than he was letting on, but it certainly took some work to get there!

Yay for Hugo not being used as plaything, he is such a sweet boy and does truly deserve better.

I'm so glad you liked this story, and the happy ending<3

Thanks so much for your comment! :D

[candamira]

Now that was a long journey for both of them! Scorpius earned my respect for not giving up on his strategy to make Albus jealous, though it took Albus far too long to surrender to his feelings. I guess he has a secret jealousy kink. ;--) Merlin, these two! I'm glad they both thought the result was worth the pain in the end. Well done, MA!

[_melodic_]

Indeed it was! Scorpius was determined (and I imagine he had a decent time along the way) and luckily for him Albus came to his senses!

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a lovely comment! <3

[capitu]

Oh man, that was hot! You know, I actually thought I should feel bad for finding it so hot because Scorpius was obviously hurting, and Al was obviously hurting as well, but that start with

I peer up at him from beneath lowered lashes, my tongue massaging the swollen head of his prick while my hand steadily wanks him.

Was damn hot. And the same with Charlie and Louis and I knew Albus was going to snap, and I love he did and told him finally how he feels. Most happy about this happy ending, mystery author! I think Scorpius is right that it won't be easy, but he's also right that it'll be worth it. :D

[_melodic_]

Eeee, thank you so much!!

I'm glad you found this story so hot even with all the hurt feelings throughout it. I was really going for emotional angst with smut thrown in so I am very pleased that part got across.

I just couldn't leave these two boys without a happy ending.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! <3

[gracerene]

Great fic! So much complex emotion between the two of them, how Albus's fear sends Scorpius into a bit of a tailspin, and, of course, how watching Scorpius then fuck his way through Albus's family drives him mad. Some seriously hot scenes (that blowjob with Teddy was a great opener!) but I'm glad they were able to work things out in the end! Such a lovely, hopeful ending. :D

[_melodic_]

Ahh thank you so much! I am still so indebted to you for your massive help in polishing the story up and really cleaning up that ending/all the boys' intentions.

Thank you for your lovely comment and, as always your incredible beta work! <33