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The List. Snape/Lupin. R.

Nov 30, 2004 18:30

snape/lupin, titles: a-l, remus lupin, jabez_fics, severus snape, fic

Comments 8

andsaca369 December 1 2004, 01:34:13 UTC

Oh dear gods. Heartbreaking, and lovely, with a perfect balance of quick pace and delicately-placed image. The plethora of scents- marvellous.

V. well done.

jabez_fics December 6 2004, 16:00:27 UTC

Thank you! Your use of the word "delicate" in particular had me blushing.

underlucius December 1 2004, 02:47:49 UTC

So beautiful and utterly heartbreaking. Poor poor Remus.

Thank you for posting here honey, and am SO looking forward to that voyeur fic!

jabez_fics December 6 2004, 16:01:18 UTC

Thank you!

And I hope you don't mind that Snape's the voyeur, not Neville? I tried to make it Neville, but for some strange reason the character insists on turning into Snape...

underlucius December 7 2004, 01:04:03 UTC

oh yes. Snape is much more likely to be a voyeur than Nev.

xxx

andpunishment December 4 2004, 04:15:29 UTC

This is beautiful, and makes you teeter on the edge of hope. Only to have it destroyed. Wonderful. Hope you don't mind if I friend you so I can read your new stories.

jabez_fics December 6 2004, 16:01:53 UTC

Thank you so much, and yes, do feel free to friend me!

bonfoi June 15 2012, 02:14:53 UTC

Oh, that just rends the heart and tortures the soul. Heartbreaking and most moving.