Fic: A Pureblood Girl’s Wedding for nevrafire

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Title: A Pureblood Girl’s Wedding
Author: ???
Rating: PG
Length: 1,615 words
Character(s): Alice Longbottom, Gabrielle Delacour, Daphne Greengrass, Lily Luna Potter
Warnings: none

Comments

[sillymammom]

Good luck

[ext_1054020]

Magical art classes sound great, nice detail to include! :D

[wasureneba]

Oh, this was fun! I really loved the focus on the interaction between the brides and their families: Gabrielle's love for her sister and her desire to be different from her was so very real---and I loved that Fleur was depicted as more of a tomboy, instead of the floating ethereal fembot she sometimes turns into. I also really loved the idea of Lily Luna going to Pansy for wedding advice.

These two lines in particular just made me happy:

“Some men make great lovers, Daph,” she said finally. “But they would make awful husbands.”

How spot on is that?

Lily hummed and closed her eyes, leaning back against him. “I want lilac bridesmaids dresses.”

“…Why lilac?”

“That color drives my mother crazy. I think it will be amusing.”

A very Weasley reaction to me. ;)

[nevrafire]

Awww this was so cute!!
i love the details you gave to magical weddings! (and magic Art classes)

I specially loved I & II (the younger sister/ blood traitor-- interesting headcanon that neville's mum was a prewett (or was that confirmed by rowling?)

and I Love how you fleshed out Gabrielle delacour! there's so little fic about her and it made me smile

Thank you very much mystery author!

[mollywheezy]

Every section was great, but my favorites were Gabrielle and Lily. I loved Gabrielle's art classes being put to good use and the description of her dress. LOL that Harry was upset about Lysander's not being maid of honor! Great job! :D