fic for redshoeson: Moments of Luna See (Harry, Luna, G)

[genficsanta]

Title: Moments of Luna See
Author: cedarlibrarian
Recipient: redshoeson
Rating: G
Character(s): Harry, Luna
Author's Notes: Many thanks to D for the beta!

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Comments

[tourdefierce]

This is wonderful. I love your Luna. She is real and magical at the same time.
Poor Harry, but you've got him pinned. Anxious and loving and confused and desperate for the simple.
Wonderful. I really enjoyed it.

[slam_girl]

That was really truly lovely. I adore the Luna you created, she's whimsical and wise and charming, and just very Luna-ish. I like the relationship you developed between her and Harry, I can see them having that unique sort of friendship. It was simple but a sweet little story.

[redshoeson]

Aw, thank you so much, Secret Santa - this is absolutely lovely! I really enjoy your Luna, particularly in the very last scene. She's totally in character throughout and I loved this line:

Behind them, the fire crackled and hot ashes died on the hearth. "If you have to ask me that, you're not ready to kiss me."

I also really enjoyed the fact that you made Harry/Ginny seem so much more real - I like that you portrayed them as you would any other couple. They are occasionally too Mary Sue for me, so thank you for that.

Really, this is just lovely - a FANTASTIC holiday gift! THANK YOU!!

[verdenia]

Oh, perfectly realized Luna voice!!! Great job with this story. So much love for Luna.
"Luna, I think Ginny kind of appreciates the ordinary."

Luna sifted through the contents of her bag. "I know," she said with a sigh.

;D Luna is like...a star-shaped peg in a square world. :P

*memories*

[randomisedhabit]

Oh, your Luna truly is wonderful, dear mystery author! You did such a great job capturing her - and your Harry is very well done as well. Excellent!