oh sehun is definitely not falling in love (except he is)

Jan 26, 2015 20:30

►recipient: teatimetaemint
►title: Oh Sehun is definitely not falling in love (except he is)
►pairings: Sehun/Luhan
►rating: PG-13
►word count: 6.4k
►warnings: an inappropriate hippogriff joke
►summary: Luhan's just too pretty and Sehun knows he's in trouble before he's even in it. ministry!au
►author's notes: you're prompts were so cute :D, anyways thank you ( Read more... )

pair:luhan/sehun, char:luhan, rating:pg-13, fic:round 1, char:sehun

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teatimetaemint January 28 2015, 11:31:52 UTC
I love how you wrote Sehun. You could practically smell the inexperienced intern on him. Fresh out of Hogwarts, still trying to get used to the ways of an adult and stumbling along as best as he can. It was really endearing, so even though he acted like a complete idiot sometimes it was still impossible not to like him.

And then there's Luhan, who confused Sehun even more (and I just love how much of a distraction he was for the intern). He was his superior, clearly older and had no problem bossing Sehun around, but the almost childish part of his personality was endlessly entertaining. My favorite parts were probably when Luhan played tricks on Sehun (/coughs/to get his attention/coughs/)

“I just wanted to know; did I do something wrong? Did I accidentally insult you-well, more than the usual amount?"
I don't even know why I loved this part so much, but I did! It actually had me snorting out loud xD

But seriously, poor Luhan. He had no idea why Sehun was suddenly ignoring him (and the fact that he kept trying to talk to Sehun for an entire week had me like ;_____;). I mean I know why Sehun did it - he's a kid (an idiot) and doesn't know any better LOL - but I still hope Luhan makes him pay with more than just a butterbeer. Although Jongin already did a pretty good job of letting Sehun know exactly how stupid he has been. And Sehun all but dying from the guilt on the inside was very satisfying as well LMAO xD

Seriously, this was such a cute and entertaining story and I liked it so much!
Sehun's reactions to Luhan were priceless and adorable and endlessly amusing and you did such a great job of describing his warring attraction and confusion.

Thank you so much for writing this! I had the best time reading it! ^_____^

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