locomotor wibbly (when i see you)

[exolliarmus]

►recipient: cosmicworlds

►title: Locomotor Wibbly (When I See You)
►pairings: xiumin/luhan, slight!suho/chen
►rating: PG
►word count: 8k
►warnings: n/a
►summary: Half-Veela Luhan is dazzling to almost everyone, except for Minseok. This is the first time Luhan actually has to not let his Veela powers do the work for him and with the help of his mischievous friends he

Comments

[edoriko]

Originally I was planning on doing suchen so I had Jongdae as the half-Veela, then Suho... and in the end I decided on Luhan because he seemed to be the most "dazzling". >///<

Sorry the ending was a bit abrupt, I'm happy you liked it anyway! ;u;

[candynoona]

Hello! I enjoyed this fic so much~ It has so many elements of HP!au that I like a lot! I lub all the characterizations of the members /but/ forgetful!Yixing has got to be my favorite<3 Him saying snatch/snotch instead of snitch was gold!!!!

[fairyminseok]

OH MAN THIS IS SO DISGUSTINGLY ADORABLE I LOVE IT SO MUCH
I would leave a more coherent comment but I'm sputtering around everywhere

Lu Han just likes Minseok and Minseok is like whatever and he doesn't get it, and the little veela bits
(because half veela Lu Han is killing my soul)
Lu Han ruining quidditch practice was funny but also kind of sad

I'm glad Minseok finally noticed him and the ending was so cute my heart is doing weird fluttery things
thank you for writing this <3

[brittlepin]

Ok. Deep breaths. So. OMFGGGGG! OH MY GWAD! LIKE OH MY EFFFFFF!!!!!

This was rich! This was epic and classic!

I loved Luhan's unintentional narcissistic attitude -so precious, so suitable, so VEELA! And the way Luhan 'allowed' people to be with him had me guffawing! Especially when he first asks Minseok to eat with him LOL! I was really wondering how he was going to mess that up, but really, that was epic!
All the little tid bits about how everyone paid attention to him was GOLD! Lu deserves all the lurve and worship! I need to build a shrine for him somewhere around here too! (I really loved his school days lol) (I really loved that 'hard working' bit too, haha)

I absolutely LOVE humor! I live for it, I breathe in it, I drown and bathe and eat and dance in it and this fic, this was just the perfect mix of fluff, romance, humor, feels sprinkled here and there, and just ajshdkjajda-sigh- perfect!
Some of the dialogues+sentences were so witty, they had me smiling crazily and snickering even past the scene itself.

Sehun is clingier

[sparklepox]

This was really cute! I liked Lu Han being kind of an awkward idiot (but not too much of one) and Minseok being totally calm and occasionally insightful, and also all their meddling friends. Thanks for the fun read!