Title: One Two Step
Summary: Baekhyun thought that having no Quidditch for a year was the worst thing that could happen, only to be proven wrong when tradition calls upon a ball to take place in Hogwarts. Not to mention that the man he idolizes is also in attendance of said ball.
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Rating: R-13
Word count: 5874
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i'm so thankful to you dear author, you able wrapped up this chanyeol as dumbstrang player and baekhyun as his fanboy beautifully.
“As expected of a Quidditch player, you have quite the stamina,” Chanyeol joked, taking a sip from his own cup. Baekhyun chuckled, taking a jab at him in return. “Well you’re not so bad yourself, Mr. Champion. Not one of your many magazine interviews said you were such a great dancer.”
that's my fave line!!!!!!!! cheecky chanyeol as expected~~
I tried to make them sound as British as I could, but as I am not British myself, I failed quite amazingly. omg no! you did splendid work!!!! im quite flabbergasted because of it. english aint my mother language but i try to look up at dict in case there are words i cannot comprehend. so my vocab is upgraded ( ... )
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This was lovely~ Thank you for wiriting! ^^
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Kudos for trying the British thing xD If I have to be honest I wouldn't even have noticed it if I hadn't read your A/N. Other than Baekhyun being a little OOC when he and Chanyeol were talking about Chanyeol's fame, I thought everything else about the characters seemed fine :) Baekhyun was a cute, shy jewel and Chanyeol seemed more wiser & sober than his years and I always find that as a very cute combination.
I only have one complaint though ... why giant? :'D the HP verse already has giants and when I read 'giant' from sort-of Baekhyun's perspective my mind threw me into a loop b/c I assumed Chanyeol to be a giant or related to one. Ofc, it's not mentioned in the story so I'm assuming he's not.
You took such care with other other things and then... giant T-T
Other than that though, it was a cute read ^^
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Fanboy Baekhyun was really cute, and I think the story wasn't slow at all :)
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