Ready But Not Willing; Gift for k8matty!

[hp_emomod]

Recipient: k8matty
Title: Ready But Not Willing
Author: luciusmistress
Beta: autumn_veela
Pairing: Lucius/Severus
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): dubious consent
Length: ~2 800
Summary: Grudgingly, Severus attends Lucius' wedding. With unexpected results.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe - all recognisable characters and settings are the

Comments

[ms_anthrophy]

Jesus. Fucking. Necrochrist. Your Severus... I was on the verge of tears because of how he was feeling in the first part of the story (it is very clearly two parts sewn together) talk about emotional. And the second part; your Lucius and their sex scene. Hot. Hot as Hell. Very different from the first part and both of them. Oh, joy!

Oh, and about what I said about the story being two very different parts sewn together, it is a good thing. Good contrasts.

[luciusmistress]

Thanks, hon! My Sev always turns out a bit too emo for my liking, as you know :) I'm very glad you liked him!

Yeah, it is two parts sewn together. There was about two weeks between writing them and the ending changed completely over that time. I tried to make them fit together better but didn't want to destroy the emo stuff at the beginning (this being an emo fest and all :D) I'm glad you thought it worked!

(We're leaving tomorrow morning instead of today, because of the weather, btw. Just saying so you don't have to wonder what I'm doing answering comments tonight :) )

[k8matty]

EEEEEEEEEE YAY! You gave me Sev and Luc *swoons* they are my fave pairing!

Where do I start with the raving?!?!

I LOVE sad, abused Sev, the way you wrote him at the start of the fic, all depressed that Lucius was getting married; wonderful. I'm such a sucker for emo!sev.

Bastard!Lucius was fantastic. I think I like him better as a cold, cruel git.

And the angry!sex was steaming!

Poor Dobby though. I think he's scarred for life :D

*swoons some more*

[k8matty]

Oh, and in response to your authors note: This is TOTALLY what I want from Lucius and Sev: angsty angst :)

Was wonderful, thank you so much! xxxxxxxxxxxx

I is totally going to glomp you when I find out who you are :D

[luciusmistress]

You are very welcome! I'm very glad you liked it! This is my fav pairing as well :)

My Severus always turns out emo and, well, Lucius just is a bit of a bastard :) If he wasn't a cold, cruel git, he wouldn't be Lucius :D

The sex scene was surprisingly hard to write so I'm glad you liked it! It was hard not to make Severus too compliant ;)

I'm sure Dobby has seen worse, serving Lucius *g*

[white_cotton]

Wonderfully, brutally erotic and so... Well, wow! Excellent writing: smooth, fluid, great word-smithing and exquisite imagery.

[luciusmistress]

Thank you so much! I'm deliriously happy that you liked my writing! I tend to be a bit of perfectionist about it :)

[thecatinthetree]

sinister.

[luciusmistress]

What, this little messed up love story? *g*

[secretsolitaire]

Whew, that is hot.

[luciusmistress]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked!