Thank you, MA, for creating such a wonderful story out of my prompt ♥
I really adored every word, and you had me hooked from start to end. I loved Draco's voice in this, and how he was so tightly wound up that he didn't realise how good it could feel to let go until Harry showed him. It was great how they balanced each other out and gave the other what they needed. I also adored Pansy, and you got her spot on :D (Harry and Draco were perfect too, but I have a special love of Pansy lol)
This is wonderful...there are just so many dynamics and emotions in this story. SO MUCH UST between the boys! It's perfect!
I love how Draco is trying to teach Harry what control feels like, but Harry wants to show Draco how to let go. So much love for these two. Thanks for sharing a great story!
Unspeakable!Draco is one of my fave tropes! Loving the background of Hermione being the one to recommend Draco for the job. It's a nice way to expend the world. I loved everything about that opening scene MA. It sets up the whole thing perfect. The idea of a blue stripe holding some meaning is brillant!
Draco being a profession is so refreshing. I love that he's trying so so hard to not be confrontational with Harry when he first takes on the case. The fact that the story is in his POV makes it even better.
Love this bit of interaction “Fine,” he bites out reluctantly. “Fine, stay. Do whatever you want. I don’t care.” He obviously cares very much, but Draco doesn’t point it out.I'm liking how you wrote Kreacher. And Draco finding him creepy lol Your use of background characters is splendid! Loved how you wrote Pansy and even gave us a glimpse in her life. Helps make Draco more complete...you know
( ... )
Comments 3
I really adored every word, and you had me hooked from start to end. I loved Draco's voice in this, and how he was so tightly wound up that he didn't realise how good it could feel to let go until Harry showed him. It was great how they balanced each other out and gave the other what they needed. I also adored Pansy, and you got her spot on :D (Harry and Draco were perfect too, but I have a special love of Pansy lol)
I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing ♥
Reply
I love how Draco is trying to teach Harry what control feels like, but Harry wants to show Draco how to let go. So much love for these two. Thanks for sharing a great story!
Reply
Draco being a profession is so refreshing. I love that he's trying so so hard to not be confrontational with Harry when he first takes on the case. The fact that the story is in his POV makes it even better.
Love this bit of interaction “Fine,” he bites out reluctantly. “Fine, stay. Do whatever you want. I don’t care.”
He obviously cares very much, but Draco doesn’t point it out.I'm liking how you wrote Kreacher. And Draco finding him creepy lol Your use of background characters is splendid! Loved how you wrote Pansy and even gave us a glimpse in her life. Helps make Draco more complete...you know ( ... )
Reply
Leave a comment