FIC: Fuck You/Thank You [Harry/Draco]

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Title: Fuck You/Thank You
Author: lq_traintracks
Prompt: #85 -- Truth always seems to get washed out in the rain.
Pairing: Harry/Draco, (super-background, blink-and-you'll-miss-it Dean/Ginny)
Word Count: ~2,100
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): None
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made,

Comments

[capitu]

O-kay, mystery author, I'm dying here!!!! DYING!

That intro with Lee's commentary was a thing of beauty perfection I can't even DEAL. OKAY?!

And then, and then it gets so much better because it's everything about this fic that is every bit as perfect as I hoped. GOOD GOD.

The way Draco reacts and he's so fucking pissed off at Harry and Harry's just there standing and taking his BEAUTIFUL rage and then the tingle of guilt. MAN!

And then! When you know, when we KNOW what's going on and it's so fucking hot and perfect and hot and omg, sweet and that ending!

/incoherent. :D

I loved this so much!

[lq_traintracks]

Oh YAY!!! I was so happy to get this comment from you, and FIRST! I squeed, but then I couldn't say anything! I appreciate this so much, and I'm so so pleased you liked it! :-D

[digthewriter]

God

This is like the best story EVER.

THE SHOWER SCENE --- OMG the scene in the changing rooms. That whole sex scene is just AMAZING. From the start when Draco is all like "I'm not talking to you..." and Harry being such a little deviant.

And then...

"You know, you're not twenty anymore. You've been hit by more Bludgers than I care to count."
"I'm only forty-three."
"Malfoy."
"What?"
"You're forty-four."

HAHA... I love this so much.

This is such a great story. i could just go on and on and quote the entire thing. It's perfect from start to finish. Thanks so much for writing for my prompt! ♥

[lq_traintracks]

I'm so happy you liked it! It was such a clean prompt on the surface, but with little layers underneath, very open for interpretation, and I just immediately saw the H/D in it. I'm thrilled what I wrote worked for you! <3

[kikimay]

Mystery Author, you're WONDERFUL. This is so hot and tender and fun; just perfect. I love how you portrayed Draco and Harry.

"I'm only forty-three."

"Malfoy."

"What?"

"You're forty-four."

AMAZING XD

[lq_traintracks]

Awww, thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it! :-D

[carpemermaid]

Ohhh yes yes yes, this is excellent! I loved the back and forth they had throughout the whole thing, and so so many great lines! I loved that Lee was the commentator. And then unf, steamy shower sex - Harry walking in there fully dressed still. And this:

"Fuck you," Draco groans. "Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you! Potter, fuck you! Fuck you!" He comes, Harry's hand stroking it out of him, ribbons and ribbons washing down the drain. "Fuck you," Draco whines, quaking. "Fuck you. Fuck you. Oh god, fuck you." Then, "Thank you."

I love Draco's line about the blowjob being for him and not for Harry. And the feeling of comfort and familiarity between them, despite the animosity. And then, god, I adored their banter on the way to the bike and the reveal that they're married ashdfldshafdljkshalfdsa, and the conversation about Harry wanting Draco to retire. And "Dinner can wait then" *DIES*

And this exchange, just take my heart forever:

Harry briefly makes like he might wrestle Draco into the mud. They stumble, arms still

[lq_traintracks]

What a wonderful comment! I'm super happy you liked what I did. I really appreciate knowing your favorite parts! What a treat. Thank you!!!

[sdkshelly]

Awwww! These two! My heart. Seriously, my heart. I just love them and this fic just really encapsulates why. All that passion and aggression turning into just slkfjlsdjflsjfs blazing hot sex--omg the from behind hand job, jfc, that's so hot. But then there's the comfort. The easiness too. They haven't lost their edge and their drive and their ability to drive each other bonkers, but they also drive each other's happiness too and just fit so well together. Fuck You/Thank You is just kinda perfect for them. LOVE THIS.

[lq_traintracks]

their ability to drive each other bonkers, but they also drive each other's happiness too

Oh what a great way to put that! <3 Eeeee, I'm so happy you liked it! I mean, I already knew you did because you beta'd it, and THANK YOU for that btw! But getting your comment made my heart speed up. ♥ I really appreciate this, honey!