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FIC: Life Was Beginning Over Again With the Summer [Draco/Hermione]

Sep 10, 2015 12:01

Title: Life Was Beginning Over Again With the Summer
Author/Artist: articcat621
Prompt: #3: Sydney, Australia is in the grips of a particularly nasty heatwave when Hermione arrives to retrieve her parents, by ally_147
Pairing(s): Hermione Granger/Draco Malfoy
Word Count/Art Medium: 3,304 words
Rating: T
Warning(s): Language
Disclaimer:Harry Potter characters are the ( Read more... )

!2015, character: hermione granger, rating: pg-13, pairing: draco/hermione, character: draco malfoy

Comments 7

ladyofsd September 11 2015, 02:58:43 UTC

Cute story! :) My favorite part was when Hermione's father called Draco out on his past behavior. The only thing I could think to add would be an explanation as to why they didn't just take a Muggle taxi to her parents' home. Perhaps they were robbed, there was a taxi strike, or their taxi broke down. If they were robbed, that would explain why they couldn't use emergency wizarding transportation like the Knight Bus. :) It would also be a great way to show Draco's braver side. hehe. :D

articcat621 October 24 2015, 23:37:39 UTC

Thank you for the comment! I suppose when I wrote the fic, I imagined that her parents lived semi-close to where they were and Hermione wasn't sure which house it was exactly. But I agree, Draco is an Muggle taxi would certainly be an interesting sight to see!

Thanks again <3

lyskasia September 11 2015, 10:03:09 UTC

*laughs* Yes, Draco would be like that, whining and complaining the whole way.

You managed to catch them very well, I enjoyed reading the story.

articcat621 October 24 2015, 23:39:49 UTC

:D Thank you! Haha, I certainly imagine Draco would be a complainer, but he'd do it anyway out of love for Hermione :)

candamira September 12 2015, 17:17:51 UTC

Oh, what a trip! But the moments of recognition, when both parents get their memory back, were really touching. Thank you for sharing.

articcat621 October 24 2015, 23:39:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm pleased that you enjoyed this <3 I wanted this to be both humourous and touching, so I'm pleased that it came across that way <3

fleiur October 9 2016, 13:00:07 UTC

"Hermione, you know, if I stay in the sun much longer, I may develop…" He paused for dramatic effect. "Wrinkles! Or worse, freckles! My perfect skin would be marred."

"Look, I'm pink!" he exclaimed, scandalised.

AHAHAHAHA!! This was adorable and cuuuute! 👍👍 Keep writing! :-)