FIC: Spectres in the Fog [Draco/Harry]

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Title: Spectres in the Fog
Author/Artist: darkravenwrote
Prompt: #61 by gracerene
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco - if you squint and think of future things.
Word Count/Art Medium: 1200
Rating: G
Warning(s): Um, none? A bit depressing but it’s a fictional moment that could have happened but not in the last film. Angst, yes, there’s angst.
Disclaimer:Harry Potter characters are

Comments

[gracerene]

Oh, wow, this is just gorgeous! You took my fairly innocuous prompt and turned into into so breathtakingly poignant that I'm a little speechless!

I love how you described the fog here, how it's at once both protective and, with the Dementor influence, sinister. How it dulls and blurs things, how it shields them, if only for a moment, from their uncertain futures.

This little moment between Harry and Draco that you've captured here for us is just beautiful, and Harry is particularly wonderful. His act of kindness, his reluctant determination to do what needs to be done.

Oh, I just love this! <3

Ouch!

[myfirstisfourth]

You conveyed the clinging, cloying presence of the fog as well as both of their mental and emotional states during that brief interlude, Perfectly. Reading it leaves you with a sort of lingering ache or saddness, just for this point in time, regardless of knowing the outcome to come. Well Done MA! :-D

[digthewriter]

This was super intense. Thanks for sharing <3

[ladyofsd]

The fog you described helped to create such an intimate and otherworldly yet stark environment, and the tension between Harry and Draco was palpable. Such a beautifully melancholy story; loved it!

[fantasyfiend09]

Very vivid description of this intense moment. Well done