Not What She Thought It Would Be

Aug 09, 2006 13:38

Title: Not What She Thought It Would Be ( Read more... )

challenge:the end character:bellatrix au

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severusslave_76 August 9 2006, 19:59:53 UTC
Love this! *pets poor Bella*

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evelynlela August 13 2006, 21:24:25 UTC
Nice plot, I like how you referred to Rudolphus’ death.

Just a couple of errors through, it's Voldemort, and you added an extra 'e' in where. I hate pointing out errors because I make so many, but I figured I ought to let you know.

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