Fed Up

[evelynlela]

Title: Fed Up

House: Slytherin
Words: 100

Rating: g
Challenge: Bank

A quick glance around told him that everything was in place.

Deep breath and in.

Walking up to the counter, imitating Draco -although he’d never admit it- he smiled at the teller.

“Hi, I’d like all the cash in your till and what’s in the back, hon.”

The startled girl made to press

Comments

[hopelight]

Hm...I believe I may have stolen your idea. Sorry 'bout that...
Anyway, I really like this one. It makes me sad, but I also like Ron's cheesy line, because I can totally see him doing that. ^-^

[evelynlela]

You STOLE it! Gah die demon... damn, it doesn't work when your icon is smiling and changing it's hair colour like that. Lacks something.
Probably the part where I feel like threatening it. It's no problem. Yet.
Thank you for the review, I can see him being cheese er cheesy too.

[sor_bet]

Oh, this is way too sad. But an interesting idea, that a wizard could go into banks and disable the alarm systems. I also love the fact that he's imitating Draco. :-D

And yes, the last line! I wrote a creepy drabble once, about the depths to which Ron would stoop because he hates being poor (which we KNOW is canon, or at least was at one point).

Very sad, but well done.

[evelynlela]

He hates it so very much, he also hates not calling the shots. Which is why I could see him getting to this stage. And I figured that they could I mean a hex... electricity apparently doesn't work with magic anyway.
Thanks for the comment!

[wulfkub]

I didn't really get it at the first read...but, damn, I am glad I bothered to understand it. This is really powerful stuff here.

[evelynlela]

Why thank you.