Where Eden Is

[animimares]

Title: Where Eden Is
Author: animimares
Challenge: Directions
Pairing: Pansy/Luna
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes: This is... just strange

Comments

[maidenform]

Ooh, this is pretty. You should continue it.

[animimares]

Maybe I will at some point. I write Pansy/Luna for the fanfic100 challenge, so who knows?

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked.

~ animimares

[laughingcamel]

Nice icon. I also liked the story the one problem I have with it that there are way to many parentheses, maybe you should try commons or --example--.

[animimares]

I'm glad you liked my icon. bloodanna made it. She's love.

Well, about the drabble. I'm glad you liked it, despite of the parantheses. I'm not going to change them, though. They are a part of my writing style. I don't expect you've read any of my other Pansy/Luna stories, but if you have or will be doing so at some point you'll see that I (mis)use parantheses and italics as my way of expressing emotions. I guess it's one of those love/hate things - either you love it or you hate it. It helps me in my writing to keep actions and emotions apart and I like the look of it. I'm sorry that you don't.

~ animimares

[laughingcamel]

Well it's not like there is a problem with using parentheses, I think it's because I use commas more then parentheses that's all. Then again I have the worst grammar ever, I just gave you my suggestion based on the way it read for the eyes not grammar or content, for me the parentheses just messed up the floor a little.

[monifieth]

Oh, I like it a lot. And I agree, it'd make a great basis for a fanfic100 story too.
I love it.

[animimares]

Thanks, dear! I'm so glad you liked it.

Yes, it really would make up for a great longer fic - but I quite like it like this. Drabbles always leave you a bit breathless; they make you wonder: but what happens next? That's the true magic about them and that's what makes me love writing them!

~ animimares

[shiny_crystal]

Aw, another drabble! I just love your drabbles (I repeat myself, sorry). Somehow, it reminded me of "Pax Vobiscum", but the drabble is great nevertheless.

in an imitation of red blossoming flowers
Oh, my ... Hell could indeed not be worse than this. Luckily, there's Luna ;)

[animimares]

Yes, when I wrote it I was thinking about "Pax Vobiscum", but I wanted to get the point out very clearly - as you can only do it with a drabble.

I'm so glad you liked that line - it was the toughest to write - I really had to think hard to come up with the exact sentence.

Yes, Luna's always there to save the day, isn't she?

Thanks for commenting.

~ animimares

[wulfkub]

Cute!

[animimares]

Thanks!

~ animimares