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The Pendulum

Nov 07, 2005 10:08

Title: The Pendulum
Author: iamisaac
House: Slytherin
Word Count: 100.
Characters/Pairings: James/Sirius; James/Lily ( Read more... )

Comments 9

momebie November 7 2005, 12:58:08 UTC

Hehe, poor boy.

iamisaac November 7 2005, 18:18:28 UTC

Which one? :)

James seems to end up happy enough - as long as he's alive, anyway. Sirius... I'm not so sure...

funkifi3d_m3 November 7 2005, 15:29:59 UTC

Lovely words and descriptions. =)

iamisaac November 7 2005, 18:19:35 UTC

Thank you :)

I enjoyed writing this, though I really need to stop getting my best inspiration at 3am!

inocciduous November 7 2005, 16:51:59 UTC

Sirius… was Sirius, and so very much loved

Eep! Loverly!

iamisaac November 7 2005, 18:20:57 UTC

Well, they were the inseparables, according to POA. And since James refused to believe (quite rightly as it turned out) that Sirius was the traitor and wanted him as secret keeper despite Dumbledore's suspicions, I think he stayed very loved.

migratory November 7 2005, 17:06:55 UTC

Very nice. I like the ending too.

iamisaac November 7 2005, 18:22:41 UTC

Thanks.

There were so many suggestions in the original post about what should be made of the word 'swing' (and I see I've forgotten to put up what challenge I was completing - oops) that it was difficult to think of where precisely to take it. There's something satisfying about finishing with the word, though.

wulfkub November 9 2005, 03:21:17 UTC

And you get much adoration from me!