Comments | hp100: No Smoke without Fire

lazy_neutrino in hp100

No Smoke without Fire

Oct 13, 2005 19:38

House: Gryffindor
Words: 100
Challenge: Smoke
Characters: Harry

No Smoke without FireSmoke wreathed upwards from the tiny clearing. Harry gasped in relief: three days late for the rendezvous, he’d only been half-certain that Ron would hang on for him. Pushing brambles aside, he edged forward ( Read more... )

harry potter, ron weasley, author: lazy_neutrino, challenge: smoke

Comments 8

lisabird October 13 2005, 20:37:48 UTC

Oh, wow. You just broke my heart. But in a good way.

lazy_neutrino October 13 2005, 21:35:49 UTC

Well, I'm glad it was in a good way!

yma2 October 13 2005, 21:33:55 UTC

Aw, dark and sad. I like this, you manage to put a lot of tension in one small paragraph. Good stuff.

lazy_neutrino October 13 2005, 21:35:20 UTC

Cheers! I really have missed you, you know! What was funny was that I said aloud, 'I miss yma' and then you turned up again the same day. I was well pleased with my psychic abilities!

yma2 October 13 2005, 21:53:56 UTC

Wow... **is scared** What's up with that? Am I but a puppet in your mechanisms? Do you have some sort of super human/magical powers? Perhaps I am not, in fact, real, but a product of your imagination! Who knows! (Dun, dun, DUHHHHH!)

hpbutterfly October 13 2005, 22:27:03 UTC

Ooh, great way to pack the action and imagery into a small space. High five!

lazy_neutrino October 14 2005, 17:28:38 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I was pleased with how much I managed to fit into the 100 words this time.

julia_fractal October 15 2005, 18:07:24 UTC

*Wah! Runs over and tries to resuscitate poor, dead Ron*

Fantastic drabble! I love how much tension and emotion you packed into it, and how it leaves you wanting more.