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reddwarfer in hp100

I Remember

Apr 06, 2005 22:10

Title: I Remember
Challenge: Pound
Rating: Pg-13
House:Slytherin
Word Count: 100.
Characters/Pairings:HP/SS
Author's Notes: Slash ahead.

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Comments 6

fovia April 7 2005, 02:30:44 UTC

ooooh.... nice snarry :) love it!

reddwarfer April 7 2005, 02:54:13 UTC

Thanks.

Leila

sor_bet April 7 2005, 04:26:50 UTC

You can just feel Harry's frustration. Severus seems calmer, almost resigned to the situation that makes Harry angry. Good characterization.

tiny nitpick: last line maybe should be "...so badly that he remembered that some[space]things were...."

reddwarfer April 7 2005, 05:17:17 UTC

Thanks. I fixed the problem.

Leila

tarnationawaits April 9 2005, 20:54:29 UTC

Title in the subject line please. Thanks!

reddwarfer April 10 2005, 06:34:07 UTC

sorry, must have missed that.

Leila