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As the Grave, Walls, Crack, No Particular Reason, Soreness and Softness, Sleep, "I Am Not Here"

Jan 20, 2005 22:19

Title: As the Grave ( Read more... )

author: bluejeanphoenix, ron, hermione, tonks, harry, trio, ron weasley, sirius, hermione granger, molly weasley, ron weasley/hermione granger, sirius black, challenge: late, the trio, harry potter, nymphadora tonks

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jelsemium January 21 2005, 11:53:59 UTC

I could have sworn I reviewed these.

As the Grave: Good job. Poor Harry, trying to pretend to be dead.

Walls: I can totally see him cutting people off to show them what if feels like. Poor kid has no idea how to deal with these emotions.

Crack: Nicely done with Hermione trying to slap some sense into him. (Poor Harry. Poor Hermione, too. Slapping people hurts! (Not that I'd know from personal experience or anything.))

No Particular Reason: Ah, so Harry's feeling a bit better.

Soreness and Softness: Well, not much better. He's still not ready to talk about it. Glad Ron and Hermione are there for him.

Sleep: Yay! Harry told Ron and Hermione how he felt about them! Excellent. I liked that this Drabble isn't particularly sentimental. He just slipped it out, without even looking at them.

I Am Not Here: Another excellent drabble. It's interesting that Harry's heart lifted when he said that Sirius wasn't at Grimmauld Place. Is that because Sirius was finally free of his parents? (Free of a lot of things.)

I have a couple of negatives. (Sorry, Jels quibbling) One, I think the titles in the subject line should be separated with '/' instead of commas. I'm not sure if it matters, but it makes the titles easier to count. (As some titles have commas in them.)

Second - I know a lot of fan fiction uses 'Mione for Hermione, but I just can't see her accepting it. *shrugs*

bluejeanphoenix January 21 2005, 12:30:14 UTC

Thank you so much, for all those awesome reviews! :) Really in depth...and I appreciate the negatives, too...from now on I will use the slashes instead of the commas...

I think Hermione woul dkind of stop fighting it after a while...you know, there'd be a few months of half-hearted, "Don't call me that!"'s, and then it would just stick. :lol:

Oh, and about why his heart lifted - I think Harry just saw how miserable an occasion it was, and how gloomy the house was, and how much Sirius would have hated it...and all of a sudden realized, "You know what? He's not here...and that's a good thing." Sort of realizing that wherever he was, he was happier.

Thank you again, so much! :)

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