Decapitation at Table One.

Apr 05, 2004 21:17


i spent a long time thinking of what to write, but i couldn't come up with anything to say.

The last train is nearly due,
The underground is closing soon,
And in the dark deserted station,
Restless in anticipation,
A man waits in the shadows.

His restless eyes leap and scratch,
At all that they can touch or catch,
And hidden deep within his pocket,
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monkeysmurff April 5 2004, 20:42:51 UTC
...crayon rosary...

such imagery.

it's lovely dear.

i guess quiet sometimes is more than words.

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howtobe_good April 6 2004, 19:30:56 UTC
yeah. i love the crayon rosary. definitely one of my favorite parts, along with "opens wide and welcome doors" and the poem rebounding across the tracks.

needless to say, paul simon is a genius.

and although i did not (though i really wish i did) write that, the last bit was me.

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blameitoncain April 6 2004, 19:47:04 UTC
I know what you mean. Every single day I wish I had written certain songs, or even just certain lyrics.

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monkeysmurff April 6 2004, 20:09:08 UTC
oh paul simon.

well perhaps we can credit them, so you are not falsely praised.

hmm?

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howtobe_good April 6 2004, 20:23:43 UTC
please read comments below.

i apologize sincerely.

oh so sincerely.

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monkeysmurff April 7 2004, 04:55:48 UTC
i think i was being semi-sarcastic.

i can't tell anymore.

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