Need a consult
Let me know if I need to move this (I know the comms are merging but wasn't sure what stage that was at.)
Hoping for some concrit on a story I've been working on since July (because of work and a few missing muses.) It's a House/Wilson friendship fic (approx. 2000 words.) I'm been working on it so long, that I'm not sure I've got the beginning and ending straightened out yet. I also have a lot of people on my flist who are not familiar with House MD and I'd like to add in why House uses a cane (without it looking like I'm adding that information in) but can't figure out where in the story to do that. I'm also working on my 'show, don't tell' abilities, so any feedback on that would be greatly appreciated.
The current version has not been beta checked (I rewrote the story to present tense a few days ago) so corrections grammar-wise would also be appreciated.
Holding On
Thanks for the help!
EDIT- All set! Thanks kidsnurse! *hugs*
Hoping for some concrit on a story I've been working on since July (because of work and a few missing muses.) It's a House/Wilson friendship fic (approx. 2000 words.) I'm been working on it so long, that I'm not sure I've got the beginning and ending straightened out yet. I also have a lot of people on my flist who are not familiar with House MD and I'd like to add in why House uses a cane (without it looking like I'm adding that information in) but can't figure out where in the story to do that. I'm also working on my 'show, don't tell' abilities, so any feedback on that would be greatly appreciated.
The current version has not been beta checked (I rewrote the story to present tense a few days ago) so corrections grammar-wise would also be appreciated.
Holding On
Thanks for the help!
EDIT- All set! Thanks kidsnurse! *hugs*