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Hi... *waves*.
I'm writing a House/NCIS crossover.
it's at about 25 pages so far, (plus a page of Ziva-isms I made up when I was stuck around page 10), and I'm thinking I'll continue it past that--but whether or not that'll work is part of what I need a beta for.
It's got some Wilson/Ziva, some House/Gibbs, and House+Ducky old friendship, but I intend to have it end House/Wilson and either Tony/Ziva.
It's basically set that Wilson's long lost brother wasn't on the streets but in the Navy, and turns up dead. House and Wilson end up at the Naval yard, turns out House used to work with Ducky. Stuff happens, etc.
Basically I need characterization checking on the NCIS characters (I've never really written them before), and the plausibility of the plot. It's not really at the spellchecking/editing stage yet, I'm just looking for a second opinion on the matiereal.
Email: Alanwolfmoon@yahoo.com.
I'm writing a House/NCIS crossover.
it's at about 25 pages so far, (plus a page of Ziva-isms I made up when I was stuck around page 10), and I'm thinking I'll continue it past that--but whether or not that'll work is part of what I need a beta for.
It's got some Wilson/Ziva, some House/Gibbs, and House+Ducky old friendship, but I intend to have it end House/Wilson and either Tony/Ziva.
It's basically set that Wilson's long lost brother wasn't on the streets but in the Navy, and turns up dead. House and Wilson end up at the Naval yard, turns out House used to work with Ducky. Stuff happens, etc.
Basically I need characterization checking on the NCIS characters (I've never really written them before), and the plausibility of the plot. It's not really at the spellchecking/editing stage yet, I'm just looking for a second opinion on the matiereal.
Email: Alanwolfmoon@yahoo.com.