035. Time - Allison Cameron

[ladybugkoozl]

Title: Vintage
Characters/Pairing: Cameron
Prompt: 035. Time
Words: 212
Spoilers: None
Rating: PG-13, for the art of suggestion.
A/N: Vintage is an actual wine bar in NYC. Don't ask me what hotel she is staying at because I honestly have no idea. ;-) (No beta used)

Comments

[synecdoche]

I love this. Your descriptions are lovely -- I can picture the scene and I can see what you want me to see, yet there's room for imagination. Sometimes you might be able to use fewer adjectives, but it's delightful nonetheless. :)

[ladybugkoozl]

Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it.

And yes, LOL, I do use a lot of adjectives in this.