Fiction: KISS

[genagirl]

Title: Kiss
Author: gena
Email: sentinelgirl@yahoo.com
Rating: PG13 (slash)
pairing: H/W
Disclaimer: Not mine, but I wish they were.
Summary: There are different kinds of kisses.

Comments

[extrabitter]

"He closed his eyes, lips brushing the receiver and said, “goodnight.” The silence which followed was exactly the length of a kiss. "

Love that line, just gorgeous.

Very nice piece, no distractions. Well done!

[genagirl]

Thanks! Longing was the hardest to do until I was inspired by another writer to use the phone - no real kiss, just the longing.

[tuff_ghost]

aww, it's very sweet! kind of had a Princess Bride thing going on at the end too :D

[genagirl]

A great movie. Thanks, glad you liked the fic.

[isagel]

I like. :) Good work!

[genagirl]

I aim to please.

[itsthewa]

This was a good story, but that last paragraph made it an incredible story. You masterfully tie all the threads together in a perfect example of the whole being greater than the sum of the parts.

Lord, I'll be smiling all day with the memory of that paragraph. Thank you!

[genagirl]

You're very welcome. We need more smiles today.

[aheartfulofyou]

Oh, it's just so good. I don't know how you can manage to write so many amazing H/W fics and never make them repetitive, but all excellent and gorgeous. You're amazing. And I love this fic.

And I had a bad day yesterday and this makes me feel better. Which makes the fic even awesomer. XD

[genagirl]

Thanks! I do worry about them becoming repetitive because I have words and phrases that I love and tend to over use. And I like themes so some times I have a situation in mind and play it out different ways.