Bloodlines, Chapter Eight - Fresh Wounds

[maddoggirl]

Chapter One is here: http://community.livejournal.com/housefic/918594.html#cutid1
Chapter Two is here: http://community.livejournal.com/housefic/932770.html#cutid1
Chapter Three is here: http://community.livejournal.com/housefic/956734.html#cutid1
Chapter Four is here: http://community.livejournal.com/housefic/969650.html#cutid1
Chapter Five is here:

Comments

[anonymous]

Boring? Not at all! Wonderful as always. One thing I've never understood, though, is why Wilson doesn't try to escape? He's going to PRISON, surely anything is better than that?

[maddoggirl]

What evila_elf said. And the fact that I need Wilson to stay put for the good of the story :D Thanks for the comment!

[maddoggirl]

Thank you! I love history, I love House - it was a simple geography problem....Oh God, I just quoted from the show. Ignore the sad, please.

[evila_elf]

Found a teeny error:
Wilson silently poured their coffees and added one sugar to House,
House=House's

And this chapter boring? Not at all :D
Thinking about Anon's comment (above) I believe you mentioned that it would't be safe for Wilson to try to escape? I know he just has to be thinking about it, and about the future.
I am really loving this, but some parts, at least the journey, seem too light-hearted for what waits for Wilson at the end of it.

No matter how you continue it, I do love it and wait eagerly for more :D

[maddoggirl]

Ha - amusing typos FTW! Duly corrected. Thank you!