New Fic: Untitled

[vascopyjama]

Heya everyone!

I'm kind of a lurker, and this is my first House/Chase fic. It's drabbley and pre-slash, but I may write a sequel if I get inspiration.

Untitled
by Vasco PJ
warnings: spoliers for 'Skin Deep', kind of angsty, pre-slash
summary: Chase just wants to know.

feedback/constructive criticism appreciated :).

“Why did you forgive Cameron?”

Comments

[simmysim]

I love this. Your House is perfect, your Chase voice is even more perfect, and the ending is just. Wah. Wonderful. A+

take 2

[jaryn_]

*hands you a truckload of inspiration*

I'd really like to see this continued. So much House/Chase is OOC, but this was just the opposite and well written grammatically and spelling wise as well.

One bit if concrit - it wasn't immediately apparent that House was the one talking in that last bit but that's all I picked up. Good work.

[sandrine]

Brilliant. I'm still bitter that they just sort of dropped the betrayal story arch at the end of season one and only had one tiny reference to it later on; and your story works wonders in terms of filling the gaps. Thank you! :)

[clarkangel]

Well done.

[moondustwolf]

Awwww, I love. Wish we could have seen something like this on the show- the fact both Chase and House are hurt by eachother. Very realistic, and I'd like to see more!