Because I Wanted To (part 2)

[hottielibrarian]

Callie clasped Erica's hand to chivalrously and stealthily lead her out of Joe's, dodging and darting through the dense crowd, purposefully avoiding eye contact with anyone to ensure a clean and speedy getaway.  Once they hit the safety of the parking lot, Callie gleefully swung Erica out to her side.  Callie freed Erica's hand, only to wrap her

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[mickaela82]

their sloppy kiss ending with an audible "smooch."

*giggles* Smooch indeed! Loving the imagery this sends to my brain!

"You're such a bad liar. You knew where they were the whole-"

Loving mischievous Callie! GO GIRL!

Callie swore to herself that she was going to clear away all of Erica's black clouds. Callie wanted that job for the rest of her life.

I wanted Callie to have that job for the rest of her life, too. SIGH!  WAH!

Fuck me.

That’s what she’s TRYING to do, Erica!

"Callie! Callie! Get off!" With the risk of sounding redundant, that’s what she’s TRYING here. Oh…that’s not what you meant Erica? Whoops! Me and my dirty mind

[hottielibrarian]

sure, go ahead and nitpick...

[mickaela82]

Well, pretty much EVERY fic I've read, has Callie as being an unhealthy eater. And...I don't think it's fair to her. First of all, just because she doesn't have a stick figure, doesn't mean that she eats junk. Secondly, every time she ate something on the show, it was a salad, or a fruit and water. Third, she's pretty athletic: she mentioned mountain climbing and now we find out about Peace Corps. Athletic people are usually healthy eaters. You can't climb mountains if you're not fit. You'll be out of breath after the first mile. Callie mentioned something about nothing comparing to the feeling on being on top of a mountain, making it all worth it (in that episode with the 3 mountain climbers). Just sayin', with all the best intentions, don't shoot :p You're such a great writer, so I just couldn't help it, sorry.

[hottielibrarian]

To be honest, I only started watching GA when Brooke became a regular and I immediately stopped when she left, so I'm not as familiar with Callie's background and/or lifestyle. I don't watch the show anymore so I don't know anything about any mountain climbing or anything. I guess I based that junk food habit on other fic I've read and just assumed it was faithful to the show. And I guess I found it kind of endearing and an interesting contrast to Erica, someone who I assume would be more health conscious. This is all based in nothing and created by the whim of my silly imagination,nothing more. But I appreciate your criticism and always invite any discussion of the characters and/or any of my work. I'm still just shocked people are reading anything I write. Thanks.

[mickaela82]

Got it, thanks for replying. I've been watching since S1 E1. And I always notice even the small details; it's a gift and a curse all at the same time. It was not meant as criticism. I just like your stories so much, that I didn't want to see you fall into that cliche, that was all. Your stories are alwasy new and refreshing and that's why that leetle thing jumped at me; it was the only thing that was not 'original', or true to the show. But if you, as the WRITER, like it, I trust you :D