bash me?

[hotfruits]

"Okay, in this post, you can bash me all you want. Okay, wrong. What I mean is that, if you have time and you have been able to read my fics, please provide me with criticisms, constructive or not. I just feel like wanting to know how you look at how I write. I mean, don’t give me comments like OMG I like how you write or stuff like that. Okay?

Comments

[hopegrl18]

I think you write very well. i alway enjoy the stories and the plots are good even when the are not supposed to really have a plot. Spelling ang grammar wise it is always good!! :)

[hotfruits]

thank you :D
and yaaaay, im insane about grammar, so you saying mine is good makes me smile!

[hibinoasami]

duh, i said it already that no matter what you write or has written, i will love it endlessly &hearts

hmm... sometimes your drabbles are too short and sometimes i do not understand the story behind it. but overall, i love them sfm &hearts

[hotfruits]

awe, I know.
and you don't understand? D: im sorry!!

thank you ♥

[ryoma_nakamada]

you write really good. :)

that's it XD

[hotfruits]

KUUUUUUUUUYA~ I GAVE YOU GOOD CRITICISM XD

jfc your icon ♥

[ryoma_nakamada]

hahaha. fine. here goes XD

i like how you write but sometimes i don't understand some parts. idk if the problem is with me or what but that's it i guess? and sometimes your one-shots are toooooo looooong that i get headaches reading them XDDDD not because they're not good but because it's just too long that reading it in front of the computer of with my phone makes my head hurt. XD

that's it.

/whacked for rambling

[aliciaswr]

Hmmmm...

I love all your stuff but I just feel that some of them are too short. =x

xD

/waves jessica uchiwa.

[hotfruits]

I need to write longer fics, haha X3

awe you~ ♥
thank you :D

[maplarojcan]

hahaha if people think you write short, then what the hell do they say about me?

*blink* hm... honestly, i think the most problem i have with your writing is that you love to strikethrough? and i don't... really favor it unless it's being written in a letter type of story. it's because i think you're trying to add your author's pov into the story. /shrug. :) and i don't know, aesthetically it's annoying (just for me though.)

also, i am very very jealous of the fact that you can make us view your entries like this. :) in this clean clean format and i want the clean format for me too. but i dont know how to do it. >.<

XD

[hotfruits]

that you're amazingly perfect? :D

awe okay, i guess for me, i see it as the person's pov like...trying not to think that? or something, but i get what you're saying.

lol i cant remember how i did it...once i do, ill help you with it!

[maplarojcan]

lol! :) yeah. i guess so. :) lol! it reminds me of accounting. ~_~ not entirely pleasant. but hey. :) if that's your thing? :)

lol.

[crazy_otaku911]

*butts in* If you're asking about how to disable the custom comment pages (which makes individual posts appear as the LJ's default). Go to customize your journal tab (where you can change your moodtheme, etc). Scroll down and you'll find a section called 'Basic Options'. In the middle, there's a option called 'Disable customized comment pages for your journal'. Change it from 'No' to 'Yes' and there you go. 8D