Comments | hossgal: Fic: FS, PG-13, bob/gen, "The Morning, the Evening and the Night"

hossgal

Fic: FS, PG-13, bob/gen, "The Morning, the Evening and the Night"

Oct 08, 2007 09:20

Title: The Morning, the Evening and the Night
Rating: PG-13 (Gen with bob content.)
Fandom: Farscape.
Characters: John Crichton, Aeryn Sun, and various other walk-ons.

Summary: There is no ending, there is no beginning, there is no moral, there is no truth, there is nothing recorded for the ages to come. 10,000 words.

( Warnings, Disclaimers, and Author Babble. )

Comments 7

kernezelda October 8 2007, 16:08:11 UTC

All of these are so diverse and fascinating! Number IV, All the World, is the one I like best. John's isolation is as complete as it can be, like Frankenstein's creature.

III, Belly of the Beast, boggles me a bit, but I really like the idea that life can exist inside a budong, persistent despite the massively high temperatures. And poor John's lost his marbles. Also, really, really icky setting, well-described.

I thought the first section might be set in The Locket, so it was neat to see it was post-PKW, and fairly sad that John and Aeryn had had to abandon their past in order to make a life together.

Aeryn Rising - odd journey with no beginning or end, but interesting in the grouping and unknown purpose.

And then the last, John and Chiana running, surviving, fugitives in a shrinking, tightening net. And Scorpius, at the last, still determined that John is the one who will stop all this. At least, that's what I get from his final words - Run, John. Live. As long as John's alive, there's a chance he'll do what he has to, ( ... )

hossgal October 9 2007, 02:20:02 UTC

You read fast!

Also, I am a little in love with your icon. Perfect.

I am glad you liked - I didn't *want* to tell whole stories, and yet, it feels a little like a cheat, to have things just dangling out there.

I am looking forward with some interest to see which ones other people pick as faves. As the mom author, of course, I love them each and all.

- hg

ladycallie October 9 2007, 05:31:03 UTC

Wow.... this is deep.... I don't know where to start. Lovely work, incredibly vivid imagery.

hossgal October 10 2007, 01:36:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

- hossgal

cofax7 October 9 2007, 18:27:36 UTC

Oooh, neat. I'll have to read them again later (fic at work is bad, bad cofax bad). Very creative and evocative.

(You may want to run a search&replace for "Suzuki"->"Sikozu". Unless that's intentional, but I couldn't discern a pattern.)

hossgal October 10 2007, 01:36:59 UTC

It wasn't intentional. Thanks for the catch.

Thank you for reading!

- hg

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hossgal January 7 2008, 06:03:17 UTC

Lordy, I am finding *all kinds* of comment I missed. I'm so sorry for not getting back to you sooner.

Thank you so much for your indepth comments - I really appreciate you taking the time to respond like this.

AR was the first one I wrote, ages and ages ago, and because it has froggie, in some ways it is my favorite, too.

I'm glad to hear the tension worked - I was trying to write 'faster' more intense stories, and I guess it worked, somewhat.

The confusion in 'Belly" is...well, let's just say that maybe that bit could have been done better. And the answer to your question is 'yes'. *g*

Again, thanks *so much* for your kind words. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

- hg