Comments | hossgal: Fic: SPN, WIP, R, bob, "Weary Upon That Road"

hossgal

Fic: SPN, WIP, R, bob, "Weary Upon That Road"

Mar 26, 2007 23:08

Title: Weary Upon That Road (1/4)
Author: hossgal
Rating: Bob, R for language, adult themes
Summary: She counts the miles by the dead things she passes, not the ones she brings with her.

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cofax7 March 27 2007, 05:26:38 UTC

oooooh.

I like her. And yeah, Gordon really is as dense as that.

hossgal March 28 2007, 02:59:51 UTC

She's...very likeable, in a messed-up-but-more-functional-than-Winchesters way. Or I think so, which is good, because she's living in my head.

And Gordon - man, what are you going to do? *shakes head*

- hg

arliss March 27 2007, 06:03:37 UTC

I like her a lot. I'll look forward to looking in on her every week or so.

hossgal March 28 2007, 03:00:36 UTC

Thank you - I expect you to help hold me to that! *g*

(lovely tree icon, btw)

- hg

shetiger March 27 2007, 19:04:14 UTC

She reached for him anyway, and buried her face against his neck, and it was then that she started to cry.

Okay, I have to stop reading here, because I'm in a coffeehouse and I'm going to cry.

(Thumbs up so far!)

hossgal March 28 2007, 03:01:23 UTC

You're over the rough part! (Of this section, I think.)

Thank you for reading!

- hg

vaznetti March 27 2007, 23:10:37 UTC

Ooh! I'm looking forward to seeing more of this -- I like it already.

hossgal March 28 2007, 03:01:52 UTC

Thank you! I hope it holds up.

- hg

vee_fic March 28 2007, 01:02:13 UTC

I really like the fact that you can evoke so much atmosphere with offhand references to things. One detail here, one there, and you've created a very rich and realistic world.

More, please.

hossgal March 28 2007, 03:03:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that works for you - sometimes I think I'm just getting too purple with the description, and its nice to hear when it works for people.

Yes, more is on the way.

- hg