[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 9/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England
Rating: G
Warnings: SAAAAP
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with the help of something unexpected.
This chapter: Valentine'

Comments

[thisiskanta]

what's wrong with American TV? :I

ANYWAYS, thanks for letting me know you updated. This was a very, very warm and fuzzy chapter indeed. o3o I can't believe you said this chapter was hard to write-- I think it was your best chapter of the fic hehe (I'm a sucker for sappiness...)

their dedication to each other is just wonderful! <3 I like that you used Alfred's POV because honestly, there isn't enough of it! (though the part about his family worried me again; well just his dad). And Arthur is cute as usual hehe, that little tsundere. XD rofl, I giggled when I got to the part where Al said someone mistaken Artie lookin' girl from the back. I can imagine Arthur turning even more redder (more than tomato red), and sputtering cutely huhu.

=w= and now I sleep... this fluff nyah~~

[hoshiko2]

I always enjoy telling you it's up. :3
I'm always most nervous about major sap and romance, thinking it's nowhere near up to par the other writers on the USUK comm. So I just get all insecure. But I'm glad you liked it. :3

[hoshiko2]

*Throws a Phoenix Down at you.* There, no more death. Lol
Ah, well, you know. The writers I watch are superb, so I can't help it. Though I feel more and more confident with every chapter.

[hoshiko2]

Then that's all you can do. Just do your best and people will see. :3

[iggyxalfie]

*agrees with icy*