[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 7/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with special appearance of Taiwan
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Delicious UST and a crying America
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with

Comments

[ladedanixie]

I'm the first to comment, HELLS YEAH.
Have I told how much I love this fic. The emotions feel so real. It's heartbreaking to see the boys go through so much pain, but if there's one thing I've learned it doesn't last forever even if the break is brief. Now, time for bed I'm sweepy (cause I waited awhile to see if you'd post again) *blushes*
Good job, and so I look forward to the next installment.
hugs and kisses, nixie. *yawn* nite nite. ^_^

[hoshiko2]

Haha, aw you're cute. I update fast with this series.
I do my best to make it real so thank you so much for saying I'm doing a good job at it. That means so much to me.

[nashi_kanata]

First time to comment on LJ. I usually read this when I'm on FF.net

-cough-

The whole push on the bed and claim Arthur's lips was delish~ <3 And the counter!! -cough- it's purrfectly understandable for Arthur to just spread his legs for our dear Alfred. |D

umm... yeah... that aside~
I fear for Alfred. And his relationship with Arthur. A relationship with secrets don't usually fare well in terms of longevity.

Well, I'll be here, waiting for the update. ^w^ I'm totally enjoying the ride. best of luck!

[hoshiko2]

It's not just Alfred keeping the secrets. Arthur's hiding that he knows so much.
Thanks for reviewing, especially on here. :3

[thisiskanta]

Holy crap, Alfred aww. ;~; I like that you added hot making out and a side of Al that we haven't seen before (with the neck kissing and all)... without going too too far. I was worried that they would end up having sex in Arthur's house to be honest. XD; You added being carried wedding style-- one of my many kinks hnggg

EEEK. I love this fic so much haha!

[hoshiko2]

I...totally can read your mind and knew all of that! HAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! >>

[alley521]

Alfred, Be throwin soda's up thar! XD hahaha

Aww, they are so cute together. Keep up the writing!

[hoshiko2]

Haha, he's crazy about his Coke.

Thanks. I'll be updating soon. :3

[kt_lovely341]

I hope they'll be able to open up soon... Al is really sacrificing a lot to stay with Arthur...

Excellent chapter once again!

[hoshiko2]

Arthur is sacrificing a lot for Al too. But he'll open up slowly. Just takes time.