Comments | horizon_greene: Psst!

horizon_greene

Jan 09, 2017 20:31

This may be relevant to the interests of some of you ;)

Comments 8

missescookie January 10 2017, 04:12:55 UTC

Wait a minute! What the??? Is this a wip?... Sorry... I composed myself now and let me just say this is already too frigging hot.

horizon_greene January 10 2017, 05:15:22 UTC

There's more where that came from. Just need to fill a few holes. *ahem*

missescookie January 10 2017, 18:15:37 UTC

I like that idea....a lot. Can't wait for more!

dream1989 January 10 2017, 14:13:19 UTC

Great start and I hope you'll fill those holes-heehee. I'd love to see how these roles play out for the boys.

horizon_greene January 10 2017, 20:07:47 UTC

Never you fear-those holes will be thoroughly filled!

fuji_fujiwara January 10 2017, 16:30:27 UTC

Oh wow! Very hot opening scene, very interesting, especially the last paragraph. Please, work on this and post the rest.

horizon_greene January 10 2017, 20:07:12 UTC

So glad you like the opening! I'm working on it every day-nearly 2,000 words now and close to wrapping up :)

fuji_fujiwara January 11 2017, 14:41:45 UTC

Good! I can't wait!