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What They Pretended Not To See

Apr 08, 2010 02:01

Title: What They Pretended Not To See
Author: hopenight
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Will/Finn, Will Schuester, Finn Hudson, Brittany, Artie Abrams, Matt Rutherford, Mercedes Jones, Sue Sylvester Word Count: 2, 329
Warning: boy kissing, teacher/student relationship
Summary: Will and Finn aren’t being as subtle as they like to think.
A/N: I should really be ( Read more... )

pairing: will/finn, fandom: glee, character: will schuester, character: finn hudson

Comments 11

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hopenight April 9 2010, 03:38:28 UTC

I always figure that would be how the Will/Finn relationship would play out if it was canon. Because they're both very simple, understated, chill. So I try to bring the tone of the relationship into this.

Some of the more understated characters need depth. I <3 Brittany and Matt. And Artie needs more love too! Mercedes just rocks.

I'm so happy with all this new Winn to read! Hahaha probably so people can get nommed at the gleeawards!

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hopenight April 9 2010, 03:42:50 UTC

Yeah I figured Sue would be an interesting character to do.

:) I'm glad you loved the fic!

annikamalfoy April 8 2010, 21:01:41 UTC

This was sweet. I like how you used some of the more understated characters in this. I like seeing Brittany in anything. Cheers!

hopenight April 9 2010, 03:45:44 UTC

Aw thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed!

Also Brittany totally needs more love.

patronstofliars April 9 2010, 07:14:43 UTC

this was awesome! Sue's was definitely my favorite, and i really liked that you picked up on the side she showed during wheels (her moments in that episode are probably some of my favorites from the show so far). that episode was great because it showed that while sue's out to win, she still actually DOES have a heart, and compassion for other people. you did a GREAT job of working with the side of sue that's behind the scenes.

hopenight September 6 2010, 05:23:51 UTC

That was my thought process for Sue exactly. I think that she does have limits. And I was just showing them. Even if she seems like a spawn of the Devil...I can't see her using love as a weapon like that.

I think she would find it too easy.

casiedearestfic May 25 2010, 05:43:11 UTC

YAAY! I think I liked Artie's section best, maybe because I so dearly love Artie, but I also think it was the most detailed section, giving insight to the relationship.

hopenight September 6 2010, 05:24:43 UTC

:D Artie's section is awesome. Isn't it? He's just so gosh darn cute. Plus I think he really does know what's going on more then the rest of them.