Random song I wrote...
As the title says, I got inspired the other night and wrote a song. This is big because I actually have a beat for this thing and everything. Anyways, here it is. I won't be posting again for at least a week because I'm going to Ireland for my fall break!!!!
**edit** I just added one last verse to the song where I thought it needed it. The song had felt off to me ever since I posted it here, so I'm glad. Definitely feels complete now. Also, does anyone out there play or know someone who plays guitar? I've a beat in mind but need someone with talent in such things to lay it out for me. Much thanks! ~Dave
"Sweetness"
How could I?
Why should I?
Break these words to you?
But do you
Remember
That shit we went through?
I couldn't
Imagine
My time spent
Without you!
And now this
Is over
Like the month
Of October!
The wind sweeps
Over my shoulder
Whatever!
It's over!
Oh baby
I miss ye
My sweetness
Come back to me...
*speeds up via guitar instrumental*
Oh baby, oh darlin what withs that look in your eyes?
With the sun so high and the stars in the sky?
What I wouldn't give to be back in your arms once more!
But I know!
But I know
How I know
We were so happy together in a far off place
Two kids lost somewhere between here and outer space
We'd grow old together in a warm embrace
Or so we said
So we said
No!
You asked for commitment and I turned you down
Packed my bag and headed outta town
I was looking for answers in a far off place
When all I had to go was right to your face
Your smile
That look in your eyes
Tell me
Whats good in my life
*slows down again*
I cannot
Imagine
My time spent
Without you
So Darlin
Come on now
Let's make this
Dream come true!
Oh baby
You asked me
Just two words
"I do!"
I'm ready
Let's do this
I'm yours
Committed!
Oh darling
My sweetness
The mood is right
Let's do this...
Tonight
**edit** I just added one last verse to the song where I thought it needed it. The song had felt off to me ever since I posted it here, so I'm glad. Definitely feels complete now. Also, does anyone out there play or know someone who plays guitar? I've a beat in mind but need someone with talent in such things to lay it out for me. Much thanks! ~Dave
"Sweetness"
How could I?
Why should I?
Break these words to you?
But do you
Remember
That shit we went through?
I couldn't
Imagine
My time spent
Without you!
And now this
Is over
Like the month
Of October!
The wind sweeps
Over my shoulder
Whatever!
It's over!
Oh baby
I miss ye
My sweetness
Come back to me...
*speeds up via guitar instrumental*
Oh baby, oh darlin what withs that look in your eyes?
With the sun so high and the stars in the sky?
What I wouldn't give to be back in your arms once more!
But I know!
But I know
How I know
We were so happy together in a far off place
Two kids lost somewhere between here and outer space
We'd grow old together in a warm embrace
Or so we said
So we said
No!
You asked for commitment and I turned you down
Packed my bag and headed outta town
I was looking for answers in a far off place
When all I had to go was right to your face
Your smile
That look in your eyes
Tell me
Whats good in my life
*slows down again*
I cannot
Imagine
My time spent
Without you
So Darlin
Come on now
Let's make this
Dream come true!
Oh baby
You asked me
Just two words
"I do!"
I'm ready
Let's do this
I'm yours
Committed!
Oh darling
My sweetness
The mood is right
Let's do this...
Tonight