The Rain It Fell, The Story Went On (3/4)

[crazybeagle]

Title: The Rain It Fell, The Story Went On (3/4)
Author: crazybeagle
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen, hurt/comfort/angst
Characters: Dean, Sam, John and Tessa (sort of….), minor OC's.
Spoilers: None as long as you've seen season 2!
Summary: One obnoxious Big Bad with some unexpected tricks up its sleeve equals one hunt gone pretty far south for the Winchesters

Comments

[santoryuu_zoro]

YOU'RE AMAZING.

Enough said.

This story is soo goood!! I'd write a MUCH better review if I wasn't about to run out the door! Keep writing, update soon?

You rock.

[santoryuu_zoro]

Oh, and your icon? ADORABLE. I love.

[crazybeagle]

Ha, thanks! Gotta love deviantart. Nobody can resist the chibi-Dean.

[crazybeagle]

"You rock" is an acceptable substitute for anything else you were going to say, don't worry! :D
I'm so glad you liked it!

[elder_bonnie]

You got my stomach churning with adrenaline. At one point I was reading with both hands clasped in front of my mouth in the zoooone. I'd like to commend you for writing a fic where the majority of the time, Dean can't speak. It's fantastic, really, because it lets you play more with the close relationship the boys have - they know each other well enough to be able to communicate with the most minute gestures and glances. And you're more than pulling it off.
So, so loving this.
BUT THAT CREEPY-ASS WOMAN. THE HECK.

But yeah, you drew me in so well. Me gustaaaaa

[crazybeagle]

Well I'm glad you gustaaaa.
Adrenaline? Really? It's like a thrill ride! Of pain and angst!
As to the nonverbal stuff, thanks so much. I know I was treading the line between normal nonverbal communication and the trope of "sibling telepathy" (which annoys the heck outta me), so good, glad I pleased.
As to the woman....well....it's that uberscary true version of Tessa, just warped and made more menacing than she really is by Dean's scared and drugged brain (and my gleefully twisted imagination). That was the intent anyway. But I guess I probably didn't need to actually tell you that. But I just did so whatever. Meh.
Anyway, thanks so much. The final bit shall be up tomorrow.

[si_star_x]

This is getting really interesting now. I'm so glad the boys got reunited in this part, aww. :)

[crazybeagle]

>is a sucker for reunions<
Me too.
Anyway, glad you like! :)

[i_speak_tongue]

Oh, this was my favorite chapter so far! Dean's terrible morphine nightmares were just chilling and so realistically mixed up and real at the same time. My heart got all tight for him when he grabbed onto Sammy's hand afterwards. So glad he's got his little brother looking after him now.

Thanks for the speedy updates! I can't wait for the next chapter!

(One little question.... Pastor Jim, he was killed in season 1 right? So is this an AU?)

[crazybeagle]

....well no, it wasn't SUPPOSED to be AU...
Dangit.
I'm changing it to Bobby. In the meantime pretend it was Bobby all along.
For some reason I had it in my head he died in s2. But oh yeah...Meg got him...sigh. Dangit Meg you poked a plot hole in my story. CURSES. Thank you for pointing that out though.
Anyway, thank you so much, and I'm really glad you liked the nightmare sequences, the writing on those didn't come easy.
And any excuse for brotherly hand-holding. >dreamy sigh<
Thanks again!

[crazybeagle]

Okay I fixed it. It NEVER HAPPENED. >shifty eyes